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by AngelTalion

person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, btw I forgot to say for chapter 9 :D

heheheh Gaara was stark naked and Neji only in some pants! Wow, I like this ceremony very much :D
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sniffles. d'awwwwww. That was so sweet.
Sheesh with the way Naru is, he's sure not an easy sub. I didn't realize sound had marked Sas as heir. I can see that causing probs later. Does Naru still dream of being Hokage in this? Can a sub (even one as rowdy as Naru) become a Hokage?
And more on Shika pls. I hope his probs get sorted soon. He deserves to be cared for.
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter 9. It was really great :) hehehe I simply adore Deidara in this :) I just love when people have their own mind. I adored especially when Deidara stood up for himself in the middle of street and said Itachi that he is not a dog that he can be ordered around. Hehehehe I think that someone tamed Itachi and that is Deidara. I love him more because of this than Naruto who in my opinion... hm... just gives in so easily, even though he likes Sasuke, in my opinion it doesn't mean that he should give in so easily considering his temperament. I just can't see Naruto who is one moment so wild and the other moment he is just another sub. No matter how precious sub he is, he is just the same like everyone else and he is treated that way which is really frustrating, just because Doms like to have all power. When will Naruto start some revolution or something? He is against rules, especially that one: to be seen but not heard. That is really stupid rule, I agree, and that is only because Doms want to control everything, even sub's soul which is really too much. Subs are not property to deal with them like that. Like things they can own, even though they protect them, respect and care for them... it doesn't mean, in my opinion, that they should be treated like property.

I left on forum a question for Bound: Will there be any switch people? That would be so fun :) Please, put some switch people... hehehe that would be fun in the center of all those Doms... heheheh Doms wouldn't know what to do with Switches :D

But overall when I put all pieces together this is marvelous story and so much to know, explore, understand. I can't wait what will happen next. You are great writer and I like how you portray surroundings and characters and events. Oh, and yes... finally Neji and Gaara got married :) But isn't that death penalty a little too harsh if Neji breaks oath? I shuddered at that statement.

Overall, I can't wait for next chapter :)
person Ryu Earth
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked that Diedara and Itachi are together again! That was cute. I wish that Naruto would introduce Pein to Iruka lol, that would be a cute conversation or bad one, no idea, just think it would be cute too ^^;

Thanks for the update!
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... what a story. So unique and different. I like this world of Dominants and submissives :) I adore that submissives are not some whiny and subservient creatures, they have their own mind and rights... Hm... I really didn't like that rule where submissives have to be all collared... That was just so obvious opportunity and so transparent because I just knew that Naruto wouldn't have his chance to choose for real does he want to be with Sasuke or not, and that he would need to be collared (even temporary) because he had to if he wanted to continue being a ninja. I just didn't like how you managed to put Naruto and Sasuke together... I mean... I would like that they came together out of their own accords... not because of some stupid rule which came out of nowhere.

Thank you for this story and I can't wait to see what will come next :)
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*the dom in me*~More. Now.
*the sub in me*~Please. I'm so excited for more!
person sunflower
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
absolutely great story, please, please, PLEASE continue! I'm, DYING for more!
person Impawsible
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story and amazing concept! Completely at your whim, I was drinking in your words like they were oxygen. You're an excellent story teller, please do continue. I will be looking forward to the next chapters!
person Wraith
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, keep going.
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the newest chapter, and can't wait to see the drama unfold. I hold you are well and enjoying your new place. It'll be put together and feeling like home in no time, I'm sure. :)