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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! I love NejiGaa :) and man you have got me hanging on the hugest cliff with all this Sasunaru lust!
and honestly, I think Im confusing this dominant/submissive thing hmmm I wonder how a woman can be a dominant?(like Sakura..)
and honestly, I think Im confusing this dominant/submissive thing hmmm I wonder how a woman can be a dominant?(like Sakura..)
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wooow, chapter sex- I mean six.. was great. I think Naru-chan has gained Sasuke's complete trust, they bonded in a way that I think only they could.. wow o.o
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your Neji and Gaara are a delight.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dammit, i hope he finds Shika and makes it right. Shika didn;t v deserve that.
smokin lemons by the way. Just smokin.
smokin lemons by the way. Just smokin.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was wonderful. :D Neji and Gaara were sooooo sweet. <3 Poor Asuma made me sad though. Is Itachi going to make a move on Shika? Also, Naruto and Sasuke are so perfect for each other. <3 please update soon!
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit disappointed that there was so little of Naruto and Sasuke, and more of Gaara and Neji. Either way, I like the chapter.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, thanks! It's interesting to see that each Dominant has a different attitude and different rules for his submissive.
You may have mentioned this before, but why do Neji and Sasuke have to fight Sasori and Pein for Gaara and Naruto? Is it an Akatsuki thing or is it because of them being jinchuuriki?
Sasuke still hasn't come clear about wanting to keep Naruto. But will his confrontation with Pein reveal his true intentions? Naruto needs to know!
And I'm glad to know the truth about Asuma and Kurenai (who is pretty cool, by the way), but I hope Asuma will make amends with Shikamaru quickly, before he's taken away by someone else... After all, he is probably in a very vulnerable state of mind, needing comfort (poor Shika).
Also, if Pein comes with Sasori, might they bring Deidara too? Itachi would certainly like it.
One last thing: once he is married to Neji, will Gaara become a shinobi of the Leaf? Is it okay with Suna? If they lose a shinobi (and a powerful one too), shouldn't they ask for one from the Leaf in exchange? Or are they just happy to get rid of Gaara?
You may have mentioned this before, but why do Neji and Sasuke have to fight Sasori and Pein for Gaara and Naruto? Is it an Akatsuki thing or is it because of them being jinchuuriki?
Sasuke still hasn't come clear about wanting to keep Naruto. But will his confrontation with Pein reveal his true intentions? Naruto needs to know!
And I'm glad to know the truth about Asuma and Kurenai (who is pretty cool, by the way), but I hope Asuma will make amends with Shikamaru quickly, before he's taken away by someone else... After all, he is probably in a very vulnerable state of mind, needing comfort (poor Shika).
Also, if Pein comes with Sasori, might they bring Deidara too? Itachi would certainly like it.
One last thing: once he is married to Neji, will Gaara become a shinobi of the Leaf? Is it okay with Suna? If they lose a shinobi (and a powerful one too), shouldn't they ask for one from the Leaf in exchange? Or are they just happy to get rid of Gaara?
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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heeeey I like this idea for a story- it sounds like it will be serious then again it will be amazingly hot too n///n
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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last chapter. KakaIru was yummy. SasuNaru was adorable. And poor Shikamaru made me so sad. <3 Please update soon!
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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have found this fic extremely enjoyable thus far and I hope you continue on with it. While this could potentially be the end of the fic, I would be disappointed as there is still the loose end of Shikamaru and Asuma to tie up. I really like that couple and have found very few fics with them playing a star role. It is true that Shika and Asuma are clearly not the stars of this fic (that's Naruto and Sasuke), they are main side characters. So, for the sake of Shika and Asuma (and especially Shikamaru in this case) I hope you continue on. I'm also looking forward to Neji's and Gaara's "wedding" (for lack of a better term) and to Sasuke meeting Pein. I look forward to your next update.