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by AngelTalion

person Althydia
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nice scene... I don't think it was too hardcore so it shouldn't shock readers (particularly with the warnings for this story). I enjoyed it and understood Sasuke's frustration at the beginning when he had to wait to be with his Naruto (did Itachi take more time on purpose? Naughty big brother...). Iruka was so sweet too (particularly with his implicit jealousy at Sasuke's mum asking Naruto to call her mother), but Naruto didn't really promise anything vocally... Will that be important later?
Also, I thought Naruto had been taught by Pein not to let dominants come in him? Does that mean he could get pregnant now?
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hawt
person silverfox
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How long has it been since you've updated this? I don't know, but it's too long! I can't wait for the next chapter! This is totally beautiful and charming, not mention drop-dead sexy! =D Update?
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so far, Interesting plot with an interesting concept. Can't wait to see more!
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's the deal with not telling Sasori till he's already at Neji's. Can't wait to find out about that. I love sweet, blushing and flustered Iruka and possessive Kakashi. Can't wait for Sasuke to be more like that when it's official.
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sasuke's control over Naruto is something to be seen. I loved reading that. I am trying to get used to Asuma and Shikamaru.^^
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there~! I noticed in that chapter list the number jumps from 3 to 5...is a chapter missing or was that just a typo?
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you have Naruto being taught how to groom himself well and have an immaculatly clean living space. That does make him that much more appealing. I love that Neji will have Gaara. Can't wait to see how he will be dressed. I can so picture Naruto in the outfit you described.X3
person richon
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story!! naru play his role of submissive righ and got a collar. see you soon with more
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
im so happy that Sasuke come to the rescue :D
im looking forward to a more Sasuke and Naruto interaction in the future

please update soon!