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by AngelTalion

person Carousel
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was so great! The way Sasuke "asked" Naruto about collaring was hilarious and quite cute. I also love the touch of Asuma/
Shika. <3 It's so sweet. <3

I also think the collar you described sounds lovely and I'm sure Gaara-chan will love it. XD please update soon. <3

Also, will you be describing Neji and Gaara's wedding in detail? I think it would be cool if you did. Maybe Naruto could slip up there somehow and Sasuke will have to punish him. >:D
person cynaga
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better and better~! So much fun and so sexy (and not even a lemon yet)!
person Carousel
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So yummy. <3
person Althydia
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Rushing it would probably all depend on how long you expect this story to be. I think if the attraction and chemistry between Sasuke and Naruto are obvious from the start, it would be more surprising that they don't end up together soon... wouldn't it? I do hope Sasuke will be able to get past Naruto's reservations and show him he's serious about him. Even before she's appeared in the story, I'm already not very fond of Sakura for what she did to Naruto. Makes me feel overprotective of him. And I'm eager to see some hot stuff between Sasuke and Naruto happen too. ;)
Also, will the sidestory between Neji and Gaara join the main one at some point? I hope they can indeed get together without too much trouble. Gaara is so cute and full of love to give! What a dangerous sweetheart.
Finally: still no development for Itachi and Deidara? Poor Itachi must be lonely surrounded by all these couples and sexual tension...
Now, how will Naruto react to the new law? (I sense a storm coming) And will you explain why this new law passed?
Thanks for the lovely chapter!
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Number 1 inspirirer, totally know that is spelled wrong but I don't care. Loved the chappy and I totally get why you are slowing down. It will just make the smut all the more better. And Temari is spelled that way. Other than that I have no other comments. YOU did GREAT!!!

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What the heck was that? the fire Lord just made it law so that he reduced his fighting force by half? That doesnt make sense. the only other option would be for ninjas to go out and get collard to people that they dont really want to be with just to fight, well not in our boys case because Sasuke wants Naruto but I dont think Naruto will want that weight hanging over him. Plus that door bell will be a ringing in about 5 minutes no matter what lies sakura has told around town.
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
everytime i read this i feel its too short!! man naruto is NOT gonna be pleased with that declaration at all :O and poor sasuke, stupid bell interrupting his 'get naru to trust me' time lol
person Stacy
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Q) How can a story be so hot with no sex?!
A) Who cares when it's this good!
person Carousel
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this last chapter! This story is just so hot and yummy and amazing. XD I love SasuNaru and NejiGaa. I'm so excited you'll be including that. Please update soon, because I'm really excited to read more.
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. Iruka is so damn sexy.