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I really like this story, it's very different from any other Naruto story I've read before.
I hope you update soon. ^_^

the gale just star sasu is dark , naru will be the perfect little sub for you. love this story

I love this! Watching Sasuke and Naruto is hilarious and NejiGaara! Woot! Can't wait for more

Thank you for your answer in the forum - and you had some very good arguments. I can understand your position on Shikamaru, and I think I just can't see him as a submissive with some specific people. As for Kiba, I think he goes well with Hinata, but usually he's trying too hard to run things in canon and he's actually not really taken seriously and he's completely whipped by his (somewhat crazy) mother. Plus, he's very akin to a dog and dogs are subservient creatures to their master by nature... I'm a bit worried about what you said on Sakura and Deidara too. Sounds like some angst in the future? I'd love to see Sasuke fight Sakura for Naruto, though - and win of course. ;) I don't know how you'll write her, but I find her extremely annoying in canon.

This chapter was very nice, as we could see that there's strong attraction from both Naruto and Sasuke for each other, and Naruto has people looking out for him (will they also protect him from Sakura with the same intent?). I also loved knowing more about Naruto's background with Pein. The meeting between him and Sasuke for Naruto should be quite interesting (if it happens)... Iruka and Kakashi's love is very sweet too. And I'll look forward to the Neji/Gaara couple. They go well together - particularly in fanfiction. I really like the world you've created, namely because you seem to have a pretty precise idea of what it involves so that the story makes sense.

very interesting story keep it up

I LOVE Sasuke and Shikamaru!!! So will they try others before they settle in the permenant pairing you have for this story?X3

Oh its getting to the rellY GOOD STUFF NOW. neji and gaara are in the mix too and are getting married. I wanna know whats going on with them too but I cant help but be selfish and want you to mainly focus on sasuke and naruto because the chapters arent that long and you can only put so much in because you are working on soo many stories at one time. Sasuke and Naruto's instant attraction is just so damn hot it is amazing! even though Naruto is the submissive he really holds all the power here. Sasuke cant have him unless Naruto agrees with and they both know it. To see him freaking out about how much he wants him to want him in private and just play it cool in person is gratifying. Then there is Itachi and the fact that he is in love with Deidara but left him with Pein because Deidara didnt want to move. That sounds just like some mess that dei would say and or do even though they both want to be with each other. I hope that they can work that out. I look forward to reading more of this and some Naruto/Sasuke smexing!!!!!

i was concerned when you had sasuke attracted to shika, it sent up red flags, so i'm glad to see that naruto has his attention again. i'm pretty sure naruto will not share his dom with anyone, and this looks to be something sasuke may have to learn the hard way. i mean really if naru is as delicious a sub as is implied why would sasu seek domination of someone else??? but who knows men are stupid sometimes...lol

I love the instant reaction between Sasuke and Naruto. It feels genuine and honest, and I love the tension. I was truly scared at the end of this chapter :S I thought you were going to have Neji with Hinata, and though I'm comfortable with most side pairings no matter what they are, I just can't stomach incest Neji/Hina... so thank you for not going there ;) I'm hoping that you will continue in the direction I think you're going in with this. For me, relationship development in a story is the hardest to write with the right amount of detail where the reader isn't drowning in monotony or missing important points because I couldn't find the balance. This story has great rhythm and flow and I look forward to seeing lots more.

I do like Neji and Gaara together and I also like the idea of Shika and Asuma but don't know if that is what you have planned. Thanks for the new chapter.