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i love your stories!

it has been a long time since i have put any naruto fics in my bookmarks: i have added this and conversion to then. (again, for conversion, i was a silent admirer before!) -- you write fantastically. <3

Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! Sasuke finally made his appearance! I my money on him showing up as a client, but this makes things sooo much more interesting. I wish you would update this abit more though. *pouts* I don't see anything really wrong, but then again, I have a cold and I've been dopped up on cold meds the last few days. So, its quite possible I missed something. Keep up the good work so far though, and please update alittle more freaquiently then twice a year please? ^^; Your going GREAT!
-Crazy Irish Lass

I think this is a good story and would like to read more soon. Continue writing and do your best. Good luck.

ooh naru finaly meet sasu !!looking foraward what will happen in his firt night!! see you soon, this story is awesome !

I liked your Sasuke in this. He's no-nonsense, but clearly a professional who knows his business. (Would have been all too easy to write him as a needless bastard with an entitlement complex. So glad you didn't.) The fact that Sasuke does know what he's doing and has clearly earned his position is what made the moments when Naruto caught him off guard especially delicious since you could tell a guy like him doesn't fluster easily and rarely gets surprised. Score one for Naruto. (And I'm sure Naruto secretly enjoyed giving him that hug and telling him he wouldn't mind being seduced by Sasuke. So score two for Naruto.)

Can't wait to see what happens on Naruto's first day on the job!

I love this story, I only wish it were updated more often.

@ Dorkchic: Actually, you can't always tell the difference between real and fake boobs. To use a sad RL example, a friend of mine is a breast cancer survivor who underwent a mastectomy. When she hugs me I can't tell the difference between her real boob and her prosthetic. (Course, even if Naruto is using Kleenex and not high-quality prosthetics, Sasuke might assume Naruto is "enhancing," rather than jumping to the conclusion he is male.)

@ Spiraling: This was a very detailed description of what working at a host club would be like! Do you have a really good imagination, or did you do some research? How the tips worked, the advice Naruto got about getting the clients to stay longer, the panic button, all of it sounded believable to me. I liked that a lot about the chapter, that it felt convincing. :) I also liked this version of Sasuke. He came across gruff, but somehow cute. I think Neji's opinion of him was probably right, despite his personality, Sasuke is basically a good guy. Loving the story! Hope to see a new chapter soon!

That was a pretty good idea Naruto had--pushing the panic button with his foot. Too bad Sasuke didn't think the same thing. But he was right. Naruto, er, Narumi still might have been raped before he could connect with said button. I was just as surprised as Anko that Sasuke allowed Narumi to progress. I was sure he would have said no, too. I'm glad he didn't.

Thank you for updating, and I look forward to the next chapter.

I loved this chapter!!! I think Sasuke seemed a bit surprised... mayber surprised about his reaction to Narumi? :)

I do think of him as a girl instead of Naruto when you use 'she' in the descriptive parts.

Hope you have time & inspiration to write more soon because this is getting really good!