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for In The Dark

by monochrome

person debsdragons
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is Sasuke going to do while Naruto is taking Itachi back to town? Please update soon
person mikey
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, my type of story! where and when is the next chapter?
person kai
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmm...wonder how much a promise means to an uchiha,itll probably alarm itachi if he wakes up without his brother though.wonder if narutos planning to keep sasuke without letting him go back to his family.babies?is sasuke really gonna have babies,questions questions cant wait to see whatll happen next
person Jen
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The way Naruto blinked out of sight, I doubt Sasuke will have much time to try and escape! Naruto has some interesting abilities. I'm not surprised that he's older than he looks (in human years) since there was something kind of all-knowing? about him. (LOL. I wonder what he's going to do about his nakedness when he gets into town. Surely people will notice!) Speaking of Itachi, I'm glad he's Sasuke's first priority in this situation--with how much the brothers love each other, I'd lose respect for Sasuke if he'd forgotten about him! Can't wait to see how Naruto will try and convince Sasuke to "mate" with him. :)
person Carousel
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story! update soon!
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope inspiration strikes and we get more soon! :) I really want to know what's in store for our Sasu-chan.
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so grateful for u giving us this latest chapter, thank you.:) I really enjoyed this chaptereven though nothing much happened. I like that there is a ritual for having children although I feel it will be Naruto changing to accommodate such a thing I can't help but want it to be Sasuke who will change, I Love a pregnant Sasuke!>.< I really hope your life gets a bit more settled before too long so u can be able to crank out the rest of the story on a regular.:). Thank you again for this latest chapter n good luck with your schooling.:)
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sasuke's gonna' be in trouuuuuble...sasuke's gonna' be in trouuuuuble :)

so glad to see you on again. this is such an interesting story. I like how Naruto doesn't seem to notice the big deal about him being naked and Sasuke keeps noticing it lol.
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it! Really Love it!
Naruto's cool demeanour and arrogance is great! Especially when he is teasing cute Sasuke!
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*grumbles*"Evil vile author torturing us with long waits, short chapters, and constant cliffhangers..."*grumbles more then holds up plate and loudly bangs spoon on the dish* "MORE PLEASE!!!!"