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:) You have a great way with words. I like how the scene was all from Sasuke's point of view and how he reacted to seeing Naruto and kept coming back to the word 'naked' lol.

Ooooh, I really like where this is going! Please update soon.

Well, what's Sasuke going to do now? But more importantly, what's Naruto got planned? Clearly Naruto attacked Itachi for a reason. (Was he already attracted to Sasuke and jealous of seeing Itachi embracing him?) He also chose to bring both brothers back to his cave, also for a reason. Will Naruto let them leave so easily now? The premise of this fic is pretty cool with the town legends and the monster and all that. :D I'm just hoping you keep the story the way it is--dark and creepy--because I think that's the fic's major selling point. (If you plan on, say, having Naruto show up at Sasuke's school after this and turning the story into a high school fic, I would say: don't do it!) Hope to the next chapter soon. :D

Gosh I like this story. You are totally great with suspense and relieving the tension in the story. You did an awesome job of building the tension in chapter one...chapter 2 was totally perfect how all that tension broke with Itachi laughing his head off lol. Then you built it right back up again. That kind of stuff is really hard to pull off well and your awesome at it. Hope to read more soon!

Naru naru naru!!! Yay!!! 'tachi can be such a mean brother, but I like how easily the two of them interact, very nice!

OMG!! Please let it be Itachi coming to him and Itachi not dead. T.T

Oh man! That was a good scare. Itachi's hilarious in this, hopefully he'll stay in this fic.lol. Poor Sasuke fainting right into the claws of the monster. 0.0

I am liking this story alreay and I hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded and see what happens next.

JJ

I hope you continue this soon. It was a good start. *nodnod*

Oooo, this looks good! I love horror story, please continue!