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for From Rags To Unwanted Riches

by TerriSmith

person Unmints
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love how you're exploring the psyches of these kinds of people and you're not checking noting it b ut setting it up in a story it's fascinating to read ahhh. I love sweet naruhina b ut this is an interesting twist.


Do you have any other blogs/places? Feel free to email me if you want lol. (also I wonder if I could do a tame sketch or two for the naruto and hinata in this story. If you're curious for examples I run two art blogs, the one specifically for my npt-so-guilty ship, amorratastic on tumblr.)

I hope you see this and let me know pft. And now I resume reading.
person larryjc
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I read in almost one go and was disappointed ti reach the end. Everything was perfect. The characters, plot, the backstories, everything. The only part I didn't like is when the guy (neigbour) turned out to be a douche. I liked him as a nice guy. I would have preffered Hinata rejecting him maily because she still loves Naruto bot because he is also a douche. But that is a drop of water in an ocean. I would search for more stories from this authour and hopefully they would be just as awesome.
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story I love it immensely, spent all of today lazily reading it or in some chapters reading frantically to hope everything returns to normal happiness. It is selfish of me to ask but I want more chapters faster cause I want...no need to know how this story ends. Keep up the good work

Jay Frost
person dannieknight
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
when is the next one coming
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Neji just made the biggest mistake in history here. If Hinata wanted Naruto to move out, she would have told him that himself. He's basically sticking his long-ass nose in where it doesn't belong.

Great story and the drama is high.
person dannie knight
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please dont stop the story please dont
person Darklordlight NL
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. Having trouble logging in. Anywho, this is some really good $#!+ you got going here. I mean seriously. I especially appreciate how you portrayed Choji. It's nice to hear that there are people that still have faith in men, even if it's only a few of them. It makes it a lot easier for the good ones and a lot harder for the bad ones. Anywho, just wanted to say thanks for that and thanks for thinking of this amazing story.
person Darklordlight NL
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I can understand how it would be hard for Naruto. He has needs, and up until recently he hasn't had any reason to NOT have sex with any girl that catches his eye. But really, Naruto? You love Hinata. LOVE! You're stronger than that, BETTER than that. Fortunately for you LOVE is stronger than that, and I'm sure Hinata will eventually forgive you for what you did; but seriously dude, no more. You've got the love of your life waiting for you, remember that.
The Hopeless Romantic,
A.K.A. Darklordlight
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Naruto finally sees the light! Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
person magic713
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like Choji. He actually cares about Hinata's happiness, as well as her child, and doesn't want to see them get hurt.

I guess Naruto didn't follow his father's advice completely when Minato said not to have a particular girl, or mistress to go to for sex when the wife is unable to fill their needs (not that I'm condoning an affair). They tend to think they are more important than the spouse.

Anyways good job. Glad to see Hinata and her son were safe. Update soon.