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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. It's nice to see you're keeping him in character as you've established it for the fic.
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh Hina, how little you know. mwahahahaha
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
agreed. no need to rush... besides. I get the feel if Hina was dating, she'd want to be exclusive and i doubt naru's up for that.
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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i wonder when he's going to start seriously going after Hinata.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed reading your story. It's a whole different take on our favourite characters. I certainly wouldn't expect them to be same as when they are Leaf Shinobi, but for the most part they're pretty true to who they are. I think it's cute when your 'Briticisms' sneak into your writing: "pocket square", "rubbish", etc, it makes the story more your own. Thanks for taking time to update. You could have this on ffdotnet where more people could read it, it's that good. Don't forget to write!
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is starting to get good, Keep the new chapters rolling in.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not so much boring as setting things up for the next chappie... which I look for ward to.^^
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade say it aint sooooo!!!! say you didnt get down like that back in the day!!! Orochimaru!! EWWWWW!!! Everything always leads bak to the bad man!! lol
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh that was very clever! Naruto arranged the break in. I didnt see that one at all.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naru, you sneaky, sneaky thing. fufufu.
He really wants those three taken care of and outta harms way, huh?
He really wants those three taken care of and outta harms way, huh?