rate_review Reviews

A great story so far! intersesting story and you have adapted the main characters to the setting well. I'm exited to see where you take the story!

Yeah Naru, you tell off your granpa. mob owned or not, you should totally look after your workers. Grrrr.
Kuybie ish Naru, coming right up. bwhahahahaha.

at first i was wondering why Naruto thought that Neji had anything to do with the Apartment being robbed when hinata failed to lock it after she was dragged away from the apartment but then that would be a good first guess. When the goon squead showed up for her Hinata just assumed that it was some more thugs that Neji owed money to once again coming to collect. Then I wonderred how/what/why would they zoom in on a locked medicine cabinet but that could just be a cultural/location/just dont have any other place to hide it thing and also a place where thugs and thieves would look for vluables. but then again, if it was Neji who took the stuff, he would know that the valubles were in there because it was always locked. But all in all it was a good chapter. I found it strange that Sakura seemed so cocky though given the situation that they were in. She didnt seem tpo have a worry in the world that everything would be fine. It wasnt the police that showed up at her house. She was just there like it was no big thing. She even enjoyed the sideshow she creted when she was dropped off at home. Looking forward to your next update.

AWESOME

I like the way this story is set up. A nice needed change that makes this story very interesting to me. Keep up the good work.

I am really digging this story! I am usually a diehard Sasu/naru/sasu fan but this one has some real teeth to it and I am looking forward to your future postings!

So far, so good. I can't wait to see what happens next

This looks like an enjoyable story. I hope you update soon.

Ah... it was a tad on the short side... but still a good read ;) and Im looking forward to more! Im dieing to see narutos reaction when he sees hinata all grown up ^.^