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for Kyusuke Uzumaki

by AngelTalion

schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's nice that our feedbacks made 100! Congrats! We're glad that we made you happy. Now, GIVE us a real chapter! Pleeeeeease!
person Calistto
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so fucking awesome! I love it! You're made a great job.
person Calistto
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love it! Kyu is such a clever boy!
person Calistto
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with your work! It's adorable. Oh, please, Gimme more XD!
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn it! you got me all excited for more....here is 101.....so can i has some more now????
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so happy you got your 100 on this fic. You should too. It's really good and interesting. I hope to see another update soon. Please!
person Jen
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say thank you for this: "Evidently Naruto wasn’t the first man in history to have gotten pregnant, weird shit happened to ninja all the time." One of the off-putting things about mpreg, to me at least, is the typically weird, overly lengthy explanation for the whys and wherefores of it all. I'm glad the story decided to smoothly move past that instead of getting bogged down by nonsensical scientific explanations. Anyway, I just thought it was the sweetest thing in the world when Kyusuke brought Sasuke that album. It's an excellent step in the right direction for them since it sounds like Kyusuke has come to understand Sasuke's side of it a bit instead of just seeing him as only the bad guy. I also thought it was very sweet how Naruto has a hard time with punishing Kyusuke/upsetting him because he looks like Sasuke. If that isn't proof of how he feels about Sasuke deep down, I don't know what is. And speaking of Naruto, I'm glad he's still torn on his feelings for Sasuke and that the two of them are still feeling their way around each other. It makes the story much more believable that way than if Naruto had just melted into a little lustful puddle after that kiss. :P It's not that easy for Naruto to become comfortable again around Sasuke. Sasuke has to keep proving himself the way he has been, and Naruto has to be willing to acknowledge his efforts first, so they both have some work they need to do.
person smint45
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I totally Love this story!!!! But Sasuke has it definitiv to easy to get back into their live!!!! After everything He has done they really should be harder to him!!!! But still this Story is just so great!!!! I so want more!!! I think I am adicted to Kyusuke He is just to cute for words!!! And he is the perfect combination of Naru and sasu!!!! Great!!! See you soon!!!!
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
I really like this chapter
I am really happy that Kyusuke is warming up to Sasuke :)

I hope that Naruto and Sasuke's relationship will soon progress

please update soon
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Sasuke!!! He got his foot in the door. Lol. I can't wait for more