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I want more~!

I am so glad Sasuke said all those things to Naruto about boundaries being set. Naruto will love Sasuke even more later on when Kyusuke turns out better for it. I'm glad Sasuke got a kiss in as well. X3

sasu act like a parent, they are puting rules, they start to communicate again. love this story!!

Great chapter! I loved learning a bit more about Naruto's feelings for Sasuke and his relationship with their son. Sasuke also had very sensible arguments about raising Kyu. And Kyu was incredibly sweet with Sasuke. Plus, Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is evolving and with the new arrangement they'll be forced to interact more! Oh, and Sasuke's way of silencing Naruto is very nice too... :)

I'm almost in tears:) That was wonderful! This chapter touched me so because it's REAL. I know silly huh?! But that's how it should be for the child. Kyu-chan was so cute putting a photo album together for his dad. I loved it! You're the Angle with the bomb writing skills. I really love your story ^_^

Ohhh these chapters still feel to short for me!!! I need more XD lol. I dont think the story is dragging. Its actually set on a fast pace compared to what I was thinking. Heck I was thinking it would take longer just to have him warm up the sasuke then that. Not that Im complaining ;) I think the whole thing is going great and im looking forward to more!

I love the story so far i really would love it, if you continued it, their really arent a lot of good sasunaru mpreg stories out there and i think this could be areally great one. i only noticed a few grammar mistakes, but other than that i cant wait for more.

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I wouldn't say this was dragging at all! In fact, this was the best chapter so far. A lot of very necessary character development happened here (that is certainly *never* a boring thing!) I liked the gradual development in the relationship between Kyusuke and Sasuke. Things are far from perfect between them, but they're starting to come to a gradual understanding. I think the fact that Sasuke has a naturally calm personality is really working in his favor here. If he was the type to fly off the handle, it would certainly go over well with a spirited kid like Kyusuke. (And who knows, maybe Sasuke's disciplined side is also helping him out as well since it sounds like Kyusuke runs wild a bit more than he ought to. He might respond positively to a bit of discipline?) Also was really, really glad to hear Sasuke's explanation. We can understand where he's coming from much better now. Of course that doesn't turn him into a lovable, sympathetic hero, but it does help us to see his side of things (i.e., empathize with him). I think that's super important for any main character of a story.

Sasuke's explanation for why he never came back made a lot of sense to me, in a real-world sort of way. We hear about it all the time: Person A moves to another city to be with B. After a while, person A realizes s/he hasn't made any friends and hates his/her new job. A's misery gets taken out on B and the relationship suffers. Sasuke pretty much would've been in the same situation in Konoha: he doesn't like anyone there (aside from Naruto) and since he hates Konoha, he certainly wouldn't be overjoyed to take up his role as a ninja of Konoha. (So, no job, no friends. But love makes up for that? Sadly, it's impossible.) But I think Sasuke is right that having Kyusuke to worry about is good for him and Naruto as a couple since it takes the burden off Naruto. Looking forward to seeing Naruto's response to Kyusuke and Sasuke. :)

awww I just stumbled onto this story and it's so cute. Aww at the end with... wow.. blanked on his name... Sasuke's son saying that he wanted to marry Shika... and aww at the part where Sasuke and son were picking out tomatoes.... kawaii

nice! will be waiting for more. hope it's soon. :)