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for Kyusuke Uzumaki

by AngelTalion

schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating! :)

Sasuke has a long way to go for him to be forgiven by Kyuusuke, but i am happy with this chapter that somehow the father and son is making a progress with their relationship.. so how about Naruto and Sasuke's relationship? will Kakashi's advice really work? i really hope soo..

i like the scene wherein Sasuke and Kyuusuke we're looking for their favorite tomato ^_^
at least now they are indeed progressing with their soon to be father and son relationship

please update soon!
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy...Naruto is gonna snap, I just know it lol. And Kakashi...too cute, acting like a father of Naruto to Sasuke! I wonder what Iruka will do to threaten the Uchiha prodigy :P
person roro237
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO! Baby girl it's not staring to drag:) It's perfect! Don't change your pace. Kyusuke made me laugh with his pranks and telling his dad he's marrying Nara. That was a good one:) But the best was Sasuke telling Kakashi his side of why! That was wOw! I could see all those being the reasons why. You are amazing that was deep for me. I totally loved every word ^_^
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter hit close to home for me with Naruto afraid of absent mate will hurt child as absent father. You don't want ur child hurt like u were by the father. I also loved the tender moment of Kyusuke vowing not to leave his dad's side. Children are so perceptive about things.:3 I'm happy Sasuke shows he still loves or cares for Naruto and wants to try family life, and that Naruto also has love and support from his friends. I hope their friends come to love Sasuke as one of their own as time progresses. Great chapter.X3
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!! Kyusuke really got that off his chest didn't he? Hope he feels a bit better next time at the docks.:3 I love that Sasuke has staked his claim on his family. I love when Sasuke's like that.X3
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, they're forging a friendship. Sasuke and his son seem to be getting closer I hope there's no jealousy. I love your stories!! I'm excited about the next chapter.X3
person richon
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
father and son agree with the same thing tomato!!! poor naru it will be difficult now to escape!! you will se sasu more often. Love this story!!!
person DrAnZeR3
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i don't thinks it's dragging it seems to be coming along great......love your story
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG when Kashi said "Itachi was good, I was always better" I was like damn!! I can just imagine hearing it in that lazy sinful voice XD
lol@ Sasuke I like when he's stressed out.
person NekoKoi
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your fic and i love it!
Finally, for me, a story from a diffrent angle in this genre, it's refrshing.
Keep up the good work!

Grtz..