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Moving along is always good. I think this is my newest favorite fic by you!

I don't think that it is dragging at all. Love what you have done so far and actually adored the part where Sasuke asked Sai to pass the message on to Neji. I wonder if Sai would actually do it. I do not think he would because he was pissed when he found out about Neji kissing Naruto and is apparently not as emotionally stunted anymore. But its funny that Sasuke believes he would just because he said so. Cannot wait for your next update!

DAMN!!!!! somebody got told,the fuck, off!!!!! Sasuke deserves every bit of it. I wonder if Sasuke would have know Naruto was preggers sooner would he have come home?

POST SOON!!!

well, Kyusuke might act like four in previous chapter but after what he said to Sasuke, I thought he was fourteen instead of four. Even if he's a prodigy, he acted a little too mature.

Before being aware of Kyusuke, Sasuke didn't seem to have any intention to come back to Naturo and now, he acted like Naturo was the main course and Kyusuke was the appetite??? Honestly, he acted completely selfish and right now I couldn't see any reason for Naturo to take him back.

Yup, I'm with AlienX, Kyusuke is naturally quite protective of Naruto since he's the only parent he's got, but in this particular situation, Sasuke isn't guilty of anything. A deadbeat dad is one who shirks his responsibilities as a parent. Since Sasuke never knew he was a parent, he can't very well have shirked responsibilities he didn't know were his. As for people being angry that he wanted to legally petition for *his rights* to see his own child, well, forcing the issue isn't nice, but him backing off just because Naruto said so is much, much worse. I'd lose respect for him if he didn't fight to have a relationship with Kyusuke. A deadbeat dad walks away, but a good parent fights to keep the relationship. Truthfully, the fact that Kyusuke is disappointed in Sasuke right now is Naruto's fault for lying to the kid in the first place. I know he was trying to spare the kid's feelings, but it's only making things harder on Kyusuke now that he's discovered the truth and knows his heroic father wasn't quite so heroic. He can't help but feel crushed by the realization. As I said before, I'm sympathetic to how tough things have been for Naruto being a single parent and continually being rejected by Sasuke, but Naruto shares the blame for a lot of his own problems since it was Naruto who chose to have the baby, Naruto who chose not to inform Sasuke, and Naruto who chose to continue chasing a person who had made his feelings about not wanting to come home abundantly clear. No one forced Naruto to do any of those things. Hmmm... a question: why does Sasuke actually want Naruto back all of the sudden? "Because he's the mother of my child" seems so arbitrary (and unfair to Naruto). There has to be more to it than that, right? He made the decision to walk away and not pursue a romantic relationship with Naruto before, so what's changed to make his previous objections null and void?

Dang that little kid is a badass! Love how he schooled Sasuke lol - keep up the great work!

INTENSE!!!

good story !!! cant wait for next chap!!!

I need to review more often. I am loving this story so much. In the second chapter, when Naruto told Sasuke that he'd give him a million chances to hurt him if he were alone... that just got to me. Naruto is such a lovely father in this and Kyusuke is quite something on his own so far.

Can't wait for chapter four.

You are like the Lil Wayne of fanfiction... Lol! You make a hit with everything you write. I love it!