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for Kyusuke Uzumaki

by AngelTalion

schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, the kids not blade sharp, not even razor sharp, he's like plasma molecular blade sharp... and not an inch of give.
What about the kids emotions tho... just cause he's a prodigy, does this mean his emotions are more mature as well cause if it were me, i think I'd be inclinded towards a tantrum or some other form of ventiing for a bit and deservidly so. The Uchiha prick has got an aweful lot to make up for... start making with the groveling, Sasu chan.
person richon
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho sasu you will need the help of god to be accept by kyusuke; he is a true demon are you sure it's not kuybi in a hild body ?? I love it
see you soon
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha, if I were Naruto then I would happily tell Sasuke to go fuck himself, then go get me some Neji and raise Kyusuke as a family.
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn!!!!!! the s&!$ has hit the fan now! I am loving how KYU is the one that is giving Sasuke hell. That is just awesome. awesome. awesome. Sai ans Neji aere running scared because they know that they never really stood a chance with sasuke in the picture and with a mini sasuke standing in the way? thats just inpossible. Again, I hope that naruto doesnt give Sasuke any quarter in this. Sasuke has put him through too much through the years for him to come back now and just decide to say "okay, I want you now so come on" and have everything be just the way he wants it. he needs to realize what he has put naruto through and it looks like Kyu is gonna be the one to show. Please work on this. I love all of your stories but this one in particular has me chomping at the bit!!!!!
person roro237
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Baby girl there in NO WAY in heaven or the other place that I wouldn't give you some feed back on this Masterpiece! I loved it!!!! That was so good!!!! I was cracking up at what he told his sperm donor wOw! Naruto is definitely the kind of parent that is honest. And Kyusuke was telling it like it was:) Oh girl I loved it you covered that first encounter manifestly ^_^
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kyu is really a handful and he sure said a mouthful to sasuke lol
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow he really isnt forgiving. I cant wait for another update soon please.
person babe
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i seriously like how this story is being played. I can only hope that you can update regularly and so not far in between. good luck!
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this it is going to be a great fic. I hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait til the next chapt