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i was so ewxited to have a new chapter. becareful sasu kyusuke is a true uchiha an avenger!!! You will not be excused easely. Love this story. see you soon

Oh boy, I wonder what Kyusuke is going to think when he finds out what Sasuke said to Naruto. Since that kick is sharp there will be no way to keep it from him. Sasuke is going to have to go through both Naruto and Kyusuke and I think the biggest challenge will be Kyuske. With Naruto's prank genes and Sauske smarts that kid is going to be trouble for him. Cannot wait to read. Update soon and thanks

I'm thrilled to see this up!! I wanted to smack Sasuke for saying he would petition the council for rights to get to know his son. Yea I know he was trying to fine away to make Naruto give in but it still pissed me off! I'm not judging Naruto but Neji and I felt like he was giving in when Sasuke started touching:) Baby girl I love it so far! I can't wait to read what you'll do with little Kyusuke when daddy Sasuke comes calling:) Thank you for all your hard work getting this to us! I'm hooked ^_^

MORE! Please post more i think the story is really cute and funny. :)

I am so excited, it's a very good plot, I love it. please update soon i want to know what will happen next !!!

The plot of this is good so far. I've read a few "Naruto has Sasuke's baby but Sasuke doesn't know it" stories, and so far, this one seems to have avoided most of the things that annoy me about those fics. Like the fact that Sasuke managed to figure it out pretty quickly instead of him not knowing for chapters and chapters after the reader has figured it out. Also the fact that Naruto & Sasuke were pretty calm during their reunion. There was no stupid, possessive BS on Sasuke's part (i.e., the story pretending that he hadn't willingly abandoned Naruto just to push the romance forward), and no emo-ish crying or screaming matches just for the sake of angst. (They both might be sad/angry about their situation, but after 4 years, one would think they'd also gained some perspective on it as well and the feelings aren't so close to the surface.) And I was grateful no one acted like they wanted to kill Sasuke for hurting poor widdle Naruto. It was Naruto's own decision to have the baby and keep it a secret from Sasuke, after all. (If he'd been told and refused to take responsibility, sure blame away.) And to everybody's shock (including Sasuke himself) it seems like he DOES want to take responsibility. I think a fic where Sasuke (clumsily?) tries to become a father to Kyusuke--which in turn rekindles his romance with Naruto--would be really cute! :)

Omg amazing! I want more! :D

It was awsome! I love the concept
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Tali, you have to finish this wonderfully, exciting story!!! I love the whole plot of the story. I hardly ever ask authors to 'update soon' but please, please try to. I can't wait to read how Sasuke will be punished and how he and Sai vie for Naruto's affection.X3 Thank you for sharing this story with us.:)

This so needs to continue. I'm completely hooked.

I loved it! Baby-boy is definitly a mix of Naruto and Sasuke:) I give this plot bunny all my thumps up ^_^