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Awesome first chapter! Can't wait to read more ;-)

Wow, just amazing! this is so interesting, I'm so sad you this chapter wasn't longer. But Pleassssseee update soon :D

Very interesting set up :) I cant wait to read more!!!

REally loved the chapter. Can not wait for more

Wow, that first chapter was jammed packed but well executed! Your writing ability is impressive and I can't wait to see what you do with this story.

I really hope you'll continue this story, the beginning is quite promising!
Kyusuke is really cute with his temper and strong personality, but isn't he going to find the truth about his other father even though Naruto hides it from him? I mean, Sasuke has the same eyes and he is the only one (obviously Kakashi's one sharigan isn't the same), plus they share physical traits and I'm sure he's also inherited his father's genius (and that's not counting a child's natural curiosity)...
It should be quite difficult for Naruto to completely deny his son the truth because he himself was hurt by not knowing who his parents were for a long time. Plus, Sasuke can teach his son Uchiha secrets concerning the sharigan that even Kakashi can't. And the fact that Kyusuke doesn't like Sai might certainly facilitate things for Sasuke... If he admits his feelings for Naruto.
Also, what has and hasn't happened in the world you've created concerning Sasuke and Itachi's standing with the Leaf? Obviously Sasuke has left his village and killed his brother, but has he learned the truth about Itachi and the Leaf? And has the war with Akatsuki happened? These events could have a strong influence on the whole context... And has Naruto completely given up his bond with Sasuke (which would be a big difference from canon too)?
Well, I'm sure you're going to answer some of these questions in your story, but it's just really intriguing and I really look forward to reading more!

Sasuke Is playing dirty using the "our childhood" card! That was brilliant! I especially like the last minute Neji addition thrown in. Sasuke is wondering why neji is C@)% blocking here but naruto is male that can have kids. an extremely powerful male that can have kids. That kinda adds extra chum to the sharks. But the main thing, Naruto is very scared that Sasuke is going to end up hurting his child just by being well Sasuke but there are things that only a uchia can teach a uchia and naruto knows that. he also knows that the council would also order him to let sasuke spend time with him too. Kyu is already showing signs of being a genius. I hope that Naruto doesnt just fall in love with all over again. Sasuke doesnt deserve that. He needs to earn it. put in blood sweat and tears for it just like naruto did.

Right out the gate and that was an amazing first chapter. I hope the updates are pretty regular. I dont know how you keep all of your plots straight in your head. looking forward to reading.

So totally love this. I hope you update soon. No one ever finishes Naru m preg stories anymore. Love it. You deserve a milk dud (Taken from Family Guy's Roger of course).

Can't stress how much I LOVE this! Awesome beginning, looks to be an excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be keeping an eye out for it!:D