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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 2
I really like how this is developing and the depth of each of the characters. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
I really like how this is developing and the depth of each of the characters. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It would be so cute if they had a little girl!!!!!
Please continue this fic as long as you can!
Please continue this fic as long as you can!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would absolutely love it if you threw in a few epilogue chapters! Please *gives huge chibi eyes* I would love to see Sasuke and Kyu at the Ceremony where Nauto is made Hokage or how Kyu reacts when he finds out he is going to have a brother/sister. What the other Uzumaki-Uchiha children are like, any hijinks in school and who they might end up with. That might actually be a bit much to fit into an epilogue. Better just write a whole separate multi-chapter story for the kids lol! Seriously though, I would love to find out what happens down the road and anything you decide to do will be brilliant!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm shocked it ended.
"The last two months had not been easy, Naruto had agreed to see Sasuke but he had not made it easy on the Uchiha. Between training, missions, and being a father Naruto had admittedly little time to properly date so Sasuke had been forced to get creative. Family dates, ensuring dinner was ready when Naruto came to pick Kyusuke up so they could eat together. He’d even used training the chibi as an excuse, convincing Naruto that no one was better to train with then his dad’s and how better to show him their respective techniques then by watching them spar."
^I would have actually really liked to have seen all that written out as a chapter or two instead of summarized, especially since it seems like a lot of important Naruto x Sasuke development took place during this time.
Nevertheless, I quite liked the ending. I say good for Sasuke for refusing to be a Konoha ninja. It was actually pretty touching, and fitting, that he would want to be a housewife, more or less, instead of a ninja. Sasuke seemed to be good at it from what we saw, and family is really important to him, so I can see him being content with mostly being a stay-at-home dad (he does have a side business fixing/renting out the Uchiha lands to keep him busy). It was also sweet to see Kyusuke's excitement when Naruto announced they were moving in together, and I found it quite hot that Naruto was so attracted to Sasuke's (sex) smell. (I think that's the first time I've seen that used in a Naruto fic, despite how animal-like fic writers occasionally make Naruto.) You know, during that final scene, when Naruto told Sasuke to forget the protection, I kept expecting the fic to end with a hint that maybe Kyusuke was going to end up with a little brother or sister, LOL. But that probably would have been too cliche. Easily my favorite of all your fanfics. :) Thanks for a great story.
"The last two months had not been easy, Naruto had agreed to see Sasuke but he had not made it easy on the Uchiha. Between training, missions, and being a father Naruto had admittedly little time to properly date so Sasuke had been forced to get creative. Family dates, ensuring dinner was ready when Naruto came to pick Kyusuke up so they could eat together. He’d even used training the chibi as an excuse, convincing Naruto that no one was better to train with then his dad’s and how better to show him their respective techniques then by watching them spar."
^I would have actually really liked to have seen all that written out as a chapter or two instead of summarized, especially since it seems like a lot of important Naruto x Sasuke development took place during this time.
Nevertheless, I quite liked the ending. I say good for Sasuke for refusing to be a Konoha ninja. It was actually pretty touching, and fitting, that he would want to be a housewife, more or less, instead of a ninja. Sasuke seemed to be good at it from what we saw, and family is really important to him, so I can see him being content with mostly being a stay-at-home dad (he does have a side business fixing/renting out the Uchiha lands to keep him busy). It was also sweet to see Kyusuke's excitement when Naruto announced they were moving in together, and I found it quite hot that Naruto was so attracted to Sasuke's (sex) smell. (I think that's the first time I've seen that used in a Naruto fic, despite how animal-like fic writers occasionally make Naruto.) You know, during that final scene, when Naruto told Sasuke to forget the protection, I kept expecting the fic to end with a hint that maybe Kyusuke was going to end up with a little brother or sister, LOL. But that probably would have been too cliche. Easily my favorite of all your fanfics. :) Thanks for a great story.
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ACtually I thought u were going to end the story altogether at this point. I mean this is the happily ever after I can see. Tehehe I love the ending bit where kyu was scarred =D Thanks for the chapter!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was so adorable and moving. I enjoyed every word. I loved Kyusuke and how adorable he is. I love how hard Sasuke worked to win Naruto back.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah sasu has his family back and maybe more... I had a great time reading this story. Thank you
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww is it over already? *pouts
I was enjoyiing that.
I was enjoyiing that.
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw baby baby baby, do I hear the pitter patter of lil uchimaki feet??? I hope so. Update soon please!
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!!! Thank you so much for this sweet and delightful story! I really enjoyed it. It's a special one. ♥