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for Kyusuke Uzumaki

by AngelTalion

schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a really nice ending with the culmination of the Uchiha District and everyone of their friends. Real Nice!:)
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, sorry but now I'm disappointed. I was reading this hoping all the time that there will be Sasu x Naru romance somewhere in the story and there was nothing. You gave your attention fully to the Sasuke x Kyusuke relationship and Naruto just tagged along and there was no tension or... I don't know... Naruto just agreed to those dates and that was it. The first chapter was like the beginning of the great story (the plot was really good and looked promising) and then it was all about a Sasuke and the kid with Naruto somewhere in the bacground.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet I cannot find words to name just how much. I love the family atmosphere and how hard Sasuke tries to make up to Naruto and Kyu. Lovely chapter with a lovely ending picture. *wants more* ^_^;
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this fic!!! Its perfect! I hope Sasuke and Naruto get together soon!!!

And I'm a southern girl too lol My mom always made chicken soup when I was sick...until I started wanted chicken gumbo instead lol! Both always made me feel loads better!

Please update soon!!! I wanna know how Sai is gonna handle Naruto and Sasuke getting back together ;)
person Jen
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The dates are cute. :) I liked Naruto realizing giving Sasuke a second chance is mostly a foregone conclusion, Sasuke getting choked up (but trying to be casual about it) when Kyusuke called him dad, and Kyusuke being sensitive about Sasuke's feeling when he started talking about his mother. It's really nice seeing how the three of them could potentially function as a family, and how they could all benefit from being together. Of course the dates aren't magically solving all of their problems (dating is a very different thing from being around someone else 24/7, in good times and in bad), but I see them as providing the motivation for Naruto, Sasuke, and Kyusuke to try doing the difficult stuff and working toward becoming a family and solving their deeper issues.
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!!! The fluffiness!!!! Lol. And Sasuke has earned his daddy title. Yay!

But don't worry about the soup. I'm southern too and I make chili to straighten my family and friends out. ;)
person Carousel
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 is soooooo cute! I love Sasuke made Naruto soup and how Kyusuke called Sasuke "dad." This fic is just too sweet. Please update soon!
person chynna18rawrr
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG *SNIFFLES* that was so adorable, i love it,, My favorite part of this chapter was when the were snuggling up to sasuke. Thankyou for the update :)
person Dorkchic
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww how sweet was that!
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Kyu called Sasuke Dad. I'm glad those two are finally bonding. Sasuke's doing pretty well so far. He only has one more date left so I hope he doesn't mess things up. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the next chapter.