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Aww... this chapter is even sweeter than the last! And Kyu finally called Sasuke dad! Bittersweet for Naruto, but a necessary step in everyone's life. It did look like a perfect date and bonding occasion. Still no steamy stuff, though...
I liked how Sasuke talked to Kyu about his family. I think it's probably very therapeutic for him too. And when Sasuke said they were not married, I almost expected him to add a 'yet' or 'but hopefully one day we will'... Also, I'm glad Sasuke takes care of Kyu and allows him to be a child, instead of giving him more responsibilities. He's such an adorable little tyke (Kyu, not Sasuke).
I think in Japan they give rice soup to sick people, but yours sounds much tastier! Perfect for a cold or even in winter, to get warmer.
Thanks for another great - and quick - update!

Haha. Kyu really wants his parents to get together, but he will still protect he daddy. Too cute.

This is such a sweet and awesome story. <3

I especially loved chapter 10. XD

Kyusuke: "Only sluts kiss on the first date..." lol fantastic.

Babygirl I'm still smiling! That was fantastic:) Kyu is a pistol! Naming his fish was funny:) Then Sasuke telling Naruto his son that was sweet because Naruto was right Sasuke usually says 'our son'. I think all parents do that:) Knowing those two I knew Kyu would walk away with all kinds of prizes. But the best part was when he woke up to put his hand over Sasukes mouth and the slut comment. I cracked up on that one. That's why I was still smiling at the beginning. I truly enjoyed every word. Thank you for your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^

[ch 10] Delightful! I only wish the trip to the street fair had lasted longer - what fun!

I'm so behind! >.< This chapter was surprising! I hope Naruto doesn't leave Sasuke hanging too long.

So far this has to be tied for the best story i have read here on AFF.net, right from te first chapter i had a feeling this was going to be a good story, and more importanly i had found a good author to follow. I really like the character development of Naruto and Sasuke, and there interactions based on this development (and what it would be like if this happend in the show) is spot on and adorible/funny. Naruto coddiling him and Sasule trying to lay down ground rules it really fits their characters. I can't wait for an update (but i will i know you have a busy life like everyone else...)

happy to know you like writing this story because i love reading it. this story is awesome. love the first date and the small kyusuke. see you soon with more

YESSS!!! I can't wait to see the dates they're on!!

I loved when Kyusuke covered Sasuke's mouth to say not on the first date.lol This chapter made me feel warm inside with how closely they interacted and the discipline each parent gave. I loved it!!