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for Kyusuke Uzumaki

by AngelTalion

person dar
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH cliff hangers hahaha makes me crazy because I really want to know naruto's choice!! I really hope he gives sasuke another chance!!!thanks for the new chapter so soon!!
person j
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. that was intense. I was holding my breath reading it. that was a cruel cliffy :p. im anxious for the next chapter.
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD!!!!!! You have better plan on having the next chapter out quick!!!! That was an evil, evil cliffhanger!!!!! Is there anything I can give you that will make you update faster????
person tamingriki
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!

That Kyusuke is certainly a handful. Considering who the birth parent is goes without saying.

I can see where Sauske is coming from. Naruto still protects those villagers who have tormented him for all those years, but he can't find it in his heart to forgive Sauske? Sure, Sauske can be uno emo but he had been traumatized by his family/clan being slaughtered by his brother. And not getting any counseling to deal with his trauma was asking for trouble.

Can't wait till the next chapter.
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I swear to all the yaoi gods, if you don't make Naruto say yes then I will HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU!!! Lol, I joke, I joke! But seriously, please let them be together! From the way you've written Sasuke, it's obvious that he really has changed. He loves Kyusuke and Naruto and, although I really hate what he did to Naruto, he regrets it wholeheartedly. And Naruto's character (the original character in the manga) is that of a trusting individual; I believe he would give Sasuke a chance, especially since he loves him so much. So please, I beg of you, let them be together! Then you can add in some drama by...I don't know...have Kyusuke do something really amazing, like impress everyone with the mix of skills he's gained by being Naruto and Sasuke's son, then someone witnesses it and decides they want that kind of power, so kidnaps Naruto with the intention of getting him to have a child for them. Wow, that was just off the top of my head but I bet it'd be amazing if you wrote it! So, once again, please give Sasuke a chance so they can be together and we all get lovely yaoi!
SasuNaru Fangirl20 xXxXxXx
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Sasuke and Kyu are teaming up to take down Sai. Excellent. I look forward to seeing how this plan of theirs works out. Moving on to Chapter 8!
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

i am so happy that Kyusuke has finally warm up to Sasuke and i like that they are planning together to make Naruto want to accept Sasuke back in his life :)
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That cliffhanger was enough to make me want to smack my husband! If Naruto holds out any longer I don't know WHAT Sasuke would do! And jail time for saving his son! They should totally give him parental license! But I can't wait for more. And stop thinking the chapters aren't up to par. I'm still reading and it looks to me like everyone else is still reading too. You're the shit!
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! who kidnapped Kyusuke? i just hope he will not be trauma with that...
i am so thankful that Sasuke went to rescue him despite the fact that he broke the rules just to save his son. screw the rules, i really do hope that Naruto will accept Sasuke

please update soon! :)
person babe
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
quick update! thanks! an yes of course naruto should give the bastard a chance. their reunion will be sweet and steamy, don't you agree? ;)