rate_review Reviews

I love your story! It's fresh, a different spin on things.
I really like the concept of them having a kid already before the 'real' story begins.
I just hope that naruto and sasuke make up and that they both can raise their hyperactive kid together
(maybe even, in the future, have another one ;) haha)

Keep up the lovely updates! I'm looking forward to them.

ah you can't stop now, what will naru say, will he forgive sasu ??? want to know. love this story !!!
see you soon

Well, if Naruto doesn't want to give Sasuke a second chance, won't it complicate things very much (like things will be back to square one)? After all, they could try slow, with some boundaries and strict rules for Sasuke to follow at the beginning. Naruto doesn't have to just fall into Sasuke's arms just like that. Plus, Kyu could have his say in this too. Does he want them to all live together as a family? Is he ready? Things can't be completely smooth from the start, in my opinion.
And then there's Sai. If Naruto gives Sasuke a chance, he can't keep Sai on the side, he has to come clean too. He doesn't seem to really love Sai anyway, from the chapter where we saw how they came to be together (they seemed to be together more by chance than through real feelings on Naruto's part - who was also dating Neji at the same time!).
In the end it's all your choice. And even though it wans't the expected plan to separate Naruto from Sai, this chapter was very nice (and the update was very fast!). Sasuke seems to have proven himself concerning Kyu, his paternal instinct is definitely strong and dangerous. I liked the fact that for once his vengeance was to protect (his son) instead of to destroy (although he did kill his enemies) because of hatred. Too bad he's in jail for that, though. :( Will Kyu be at least allowed to visit?
Now if only Naruto could stop torturing himself and accept Sasuke's feelings... The way I see it, as long as Sasuke is around and a father to Kyu, Naruto won't be able to forget his feelings for him and won't be completely happy anyway. And he won't know if Sasuke has changed until he gives him a chance too. It's not an easy decision, of course, but love is often a gamble. What do you think?

you are evil... Of course I want Sasuke to have another chance... but Naruto needs to torture him for awhile... you know seduce him and leave him hanging... things of that sort...

actually as much as I like suspence and having sasuke torn down by a rejection. I think Naruto should say "yes" if another attack happens who will stand by his side? Who is strong enough, and has enough courage to stay at narutos' side? Especially if they child isn't their's?

I admit it's hard to raise someone else's child. But I think Naruto should give Sasuke another chance. The only person a husband can trust with their kid is the other husband!

YAY!!! I love where this is going tehehe I'm doing the happy dance!! Thanks for the chapter!! I can't wait to see where sasuke takes naru and kyu!!

I absolutely love the chapters you posted great job on them , Sasuke does need to prove himself BIG TIME to Naruto because of what he did and with that , i look forward to the next chapters this story is turning out great so far :)

I can't wait for the date!

Wow, another update already! And yay, Naruto is giving Sasuke a chance! And they'll have a family date! Well, hopefully Sasuke will also get some alone time with Naruto... ;)
It's nice to see the familiar banter between Naruto and Sasuke too, it shows that there is still this bond between them no matter what. Plus, it's interesting how the dynamics between Kyu and each of his dad vary. Makes me want to see how they would work out as a family on a daily basis...
Well, there are still some issues for Naruto and Sasuke to overcome, but at least there's love and they have made the first step. And of course they seem to have their (adorable) son's support in this. :)
Now Sasuke has a date to prepare... but has Sai given up already?

Kyusuke is so cute! I wouldn't want to babysit him but hes adorable :D