rate_review Reviews

wow.
i'm really liking this story.
i cant wait for more.
and i read the end of the last chapter.
so i wont put what i normally type here.
lol.
love it so far.
cant wait for more![is this ok?]
{i think of that as a compliment}

~Golden Kitsune~

Just wanted to say I LOVE your stories! I look forward to each update, but I do understand what having so much busy-ness going on can be like.

Waiting for updates is like waiting for Christmas or my birthday lol it seems like it takes forever, but then the day comes and I get what I've been asking for, for the last 6 mos, and it's AWESOME xD

Keep up the good work!

I usually don't read AU fanfics, but I wanted to say that this is probably one of the best fics I've ever read, canon or not! I really hope you update soon!! You're extremely good at writing! ^^

I'm so glad you're reposting this story. I loved the concept behind it and I was really sad when you went on hiatus. If I remember correctly, the part you stopped at made me want to keep reading more XD

I like your idea of having grace chapters. It's true, you never know when writer's block will hit you so it's good to have a back up plan. That being said, I'm still a little saddened knowing there are finished chapters in existence that I can't read yet. I'll get over it, it's not like I don't have a million other fics I can read to pass the time, lol!

I like the website you set up for yourself, I think it's a nice idea to have a collection of your stories someplace away from all the archiving sites like deviantart and aff.net and ff.net. There's one person on deviantart that I check their personal site before I check their profile on DA because she tends to update her site before she updates her DA.

I have to comment that this is incredibly well written, even the original was really well done, and you somehow improved upon that which I didn't think was possible. Most people can't write first person to save their lives and you did it so well I almost can't believe it. It really felt like I was getting inside the characters' heads and that's what I love about first person perspective.

I was originally looking for the fic so I could read some key scenes I really enjoyed, but you haven't posted those chapters yet so I'm sol in that respect XD

Looking forward to the next update, even though I pretty much know what happens, it'll be fun to read it again XD

Very sorry to hear you feel pressured by certain reviewers. Since you enjoy writing, it's sad for someone's inconsiderate words to detract from something you like to do. Ignore them if you can and keep writing for yourself? (I know, I know, easy to say, hard to do.) I have friends who only read completed fics because they don't like waiting around for chapter updates, etc. I think if as a reader, you KNOW you feel that way, then adopting such a policy is a mature decision to make since it keeps both reader and writer happy.

Anyway, on to the chapter: I loved it, as usual. :D I was surprised (in a good way) that Naruto told Sasuke about his family background. At this point, Sasuke has no way of knowing that Naruto doesn't share that information with anyone, period. But then again, Sasuke doesn't usually share that kind of information about himself either, so they are growing much closer than either one realizes as this point. I'm wondering if Naruto's willingness to share came from the fact that he sensed on some level that Sasuke had just told him something private, and if he identified with the fact that Fugaku doesn't like Sasuke's "girly" looks. Being self-conscious about his appearance and feeling like an unwanted kid are all things Naruto can understand. (And as a private aside, apologies to the fangirls, but I've never found Itachi's ponytail sexy, so I burst out laughing when Sasuke cracked on him for it.)

The ending of the chapter is a killer! Just like when they kissed, Naruto froze again, this time at seeing a naked and cum-splattered Sasuke. (Naruto is SUCH a lucky bastard!!!!) I can hardly believe that he froze (and then wouldn't leave!) out of shock alone. Just like when they kissed, Naruto recognizes his freezing up and being unable to move away from Sasuke is an odd response even while he's doing it ("I know I should probably leave before he realizes I've seen anything"), yet he rationalizes rather than leaving as he ought to do. I'm dying to know what he thought about what he saw, especially since Naruto can't even bring himself to masturbate.

(BTW, when Sasuke mentioned that the incident with Naruto was worse than when Neji interrupted him, did he mean when Neji brought him that letter at the beginning of the story, or was there a different incident?)

The ending of the chapter was both hot and sad at the same time, how Sasuke is trying so hard not to be attracted to Naruto, yet found himself unconsciously imagining it was Naruto who was inside of him instead of the toy. Is a cold pillow and "the dull vibrations" of his sex toy really going to be enough anymore, now that Sasuke has begun to realize what it's like to have someone like Naruto in his life? :(

I love the chapter I thought I read this some time before, it was like I had already read some of the chapters, idk lol. Great job and don't feel too bad I stopped updating for like two years so i understand not being motivated to really write with alot going on. I love this story and can't wait till the next chapter, no rush, well kinda, not really. lol :D

I completely understand, and I think it sucks that more people arn't considerate. It is very time consuming writing a story, and it canalso be very frusterating developing a storyline, but I really love your story. Don't let people pressure you into working faster. Work at your own speed. I will wait paitiently and unjudgementally for your next update

I love this story and all of your other ones. It's always great to see an update to one or more of them. No matter how long or short between updates. Hope you continue and don't stop again.

This story and your Over-Under are one of my favorite fanfictions ever so please continue to update. Pretty Please! :)

Take you time. I can wait forever for your stories. That's how good they are. =) I hope you will feel better.

yay an update! i feel like i've been waiting forever!!! i can't wait for the next one:]