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LOL! It's nice to see Sasuke so uninhibited about his sexual pleasure. When he and Naruto finally get together, there will probably be some very imaginative lemons.XD

I do like this. It is much easier to read too :)

OMG, I loved it!

Good grief, Sasuke is kinky. Naruto is going to have SUCH a good time with him once he gets over himself. It's kind of awesome how Sasuke likes to bottom, but thought the bottom's submissiveness in the video was hot. (I totally vote for Sasuke getting to try top at least once, not only because I'm curious what this kind of Sasuke could do on top, but mainly because homophobe Naruto totally deserves having to try out bottom. HA!) Anyway, I think it's interesting how your Naruto contributes to his own problems instead of just being an innocent victim. Sakura was wrong for what she did, that's for sure, but Naruto jumped to conclusions too quickly about Sasuke being a jerk he needs to avoid at all costs. And I wanted to shake him when he said Kiba's texts were a result of him giving a damn enough to pretend to give a damn. Seriously?! Not only is it convoluted logic, but who would bother *pretending* to care; what could Kiba possibly be getting out of something like that? Ah well, Naruto has had a tough time of it; now he needs Sasuke to help make him happy. :)

have I told you I love this one? Cause I kinda do. LOL Naruto the prude. I just NEVER would have thought of that one. *snickers* Narutot he Prude and Sasuke the whore... yeah this is gonna be FUN. Hope to see updates quickly!

Great story, update soon please!

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! :jumps up and down like an excited Yachiru: I can't wait to get more! I loved the new prologue, and Naruto's POV. Yay! I'm so happy. Are you doing a mailing list? I just had to ask...

i like narus pov. his ideas about high school are exactly the way i felt in hs. so he has amuch more identifiable character. geeze its hard to type on a kindle.

Awesome! I really liked this. I'm almost afraid to get to the Naruto is a homophobe bits. But i know you're a great writer so you'll make it all better... I hope. o.O Please? I hope to see an update soon :)

Adding a bit more to what their lives were like before they met was a good idea; it helps us get to know the characters even better. I think we can appreciate the changes they'll undergo even more this way. Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters!