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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is so good! What is happening? Who is Sai? The atmosphere is so thick and heavy. I love it! I was literally on the edge of my seat. I couldn't read fast enough to know what happens next and then it ended and now I wished I read it slower to make I last a bit longer. Looking forward to the second part. Wonderful story you have here.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is darkly mysterious. I love it and can't wait for more. 5+ stars
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is really good! Now I'm absolutely dying to read the next part!!!! There's so many unanswered questions, like how the kid happened to recognize Sasuke--he'd seen him before but didn't know he was Itachi's brother? Why did that bother the kid so much? What would Itachi have been doing at a massage parlor and why would it have gotten him killed? Such a mystery! I love it! :D The tension between Naruto and Sasuke is lovely, too. I felt so sad when Naruto just wanted to lay down next to Sasuke and comfort him. It was such a tender, loving thought. Hopefully Naruto will get his chance to comfort him soon?