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July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying reading your work =) I like how you change the Point Of View from one to the other throughout the story and i cant wait to see Naruto's plan XD Oh and thanks for posting this =)
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June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey :)
I just wanted to let you know that this story seriously takes my breath away. The way you have written it is simply amazing! You say there is no storyline but it all flows.
I want to thank you for writing this story. You really made me smile after a bad day. I hope to see more of this story soon.
Regards,
Mandy xx
I just wanted to let you know that this story seriously takes my breath away. The way you have written it is simply amazing! You say there is no storyline but it all flows.
I want to thank you for writing this story. You really made me smile after a bad day. I hope to see more of this story soon.
Regards,
Mandy xx
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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay for more posting! *happy dances allllll around you.
Um... Naru, you might want to review that plan. I have a feeling plan touch a lot is gooing to either get Naru molested or turn into plan bashed a lot... more like ly the second. :P
Um... Naru, you might want to review that plan. I have a feeling plan touch a lot is gooing to either get Naru molested or turn into plan bashed a lot... more like ly the second. :P
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So what if you're slow. Creative genieus takes patience, and I am willing to wait to read it. I like how it is going so far.
So update again please.
So update again please.
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heehee AWESOME! Sasuke is being stalked by Naru... poor Sasuke doesn't know what he's in for!! Bwahahahahahaha
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was the Naruto I come to love:) Thinking of ways to touch Sasuke?! I'm looking so forward to what Naruto has in mind ^_^
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sai's point of view....LOVE IT!! Short and VERY SWEET!!! I would like to keep watching all three points of views....its a fresh fun approach....used to seeing Naruto and Sasuke view but with a third party view....its just soooo much fun and I am looking forward to what happens next!! ^-^ Happy!!!
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your story. do as you will with it... besides, Sai's point of view is faascinating.
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was cute from Sai perspective ^_^
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahaha... Naruto takes initiative! awesomeness. this is adorable. two enthusiastic thumbs up to you!