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for I like to watch him sleep

by moodysavage

schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like to watch him sleep

I just love this moodysavage!! Its very SWEET and ADORABLE!!
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is this what you were talking about the other night... if it is... WOW! This was very awesome. It gave me shivers. Its both happy and sad and I kind of like that! Great job!
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so endearing to read. Naruto is so in love with him and its very sweet. I loved it!:3
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful scene. Very well written. Your profile says that you can't measure up, yet it's clear that you can. The next step is to start stitching scenes into narrative. And I'm also willing to bet that you're better at that than you think.
Keep writing. Always keep writing.