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I'm so glad you finished this! And Neji/Naruto are sweet together. Naruto needs someone who totally loves him.

Thanks for finishing, I really appreciate it :) Glad that Naruto found someone to love him... Looking forward for next stories ^^ Good luck with your current projects.

Oooo, awesome. 1 chapter down...

Aww, so sweet. I'm glad that Naruto found love in Neji.

Another good story unfinished :/ I would understand if it was bad...and it wasn't. The plot and characters were quite simple, but in a charming and funny way. Love scenes were great. It's not masterpiece but nice story worth reading and finishing...

You are easliy becoming my favorite author on here. Lol. Another great story so far. There is a lot of humor in it which makes this refreshing to read. You are wonderful at writing yaoi sex scenes! I personally would like a guy to be Nauto's secret admirer but a woman is ok too. I'd like to see more of Sasuke and Kakashi having sex outside the bedroom, that was an enticing scene at the training grounds. Please keep writing!

*fangirl squeal!!!!!* I loved this chapter!!! Kakashi & Sasuke together was very sexy... loved them outside on the tree too. Kakashi putting Sasuke's hands where he wanted them and telling him to keep them there... seeeeexy!

I'm totally excited about Naruto having a secret admirer too!!! Gotta guess gotta guess! Now let's see... since they did the same thing that Naruto did to woo Sasuke... sending flowers... then they were probably in the flower shop. I find Sai hilarious but I don't think he has any family to be reunited with. That leaves Shika and Neji and I'll rule Shika out for the same reason. So my guess is NEJI!!!! Which I'm totally excited about because I like how you described him as being really quiet in the flower shop and how he volunteered to deliver the flowers... because he wanted to see the couple for himself and maybe see Sasuke's reaction?

Even if I'm wrong it's still all good... a secret admirerer for Naruto will help take his focus off Sasuke and he so deserves someone to be crazy for him too! I'm glad our comments got you thinking for this story!!!

I think you should have Kakashi try to get Sasuke to agree to some kinks :P

Though... most of this chapter seemed more like foot notes then actual writing.

Poor Naruto... he did focus on Sasuke for all those years so Sasuke really was more important to him than Sakura.It would be like Naruto to be oblivious and just accept that he 'loved' Sakura out of habit until he realized that loving Sasuke as his most important person didn't just have to be as a best friend.

But with how you've written the story... it doesn't make sense for them to end up together. It'd make more sense for Naruto to try to woo Sasuke and be unsuccessful and figure out later from watching Kakashi and Sasuke that he just figured things out too late and there is nothing he can do about it. I think them kissing in the hospital must have really hurt him and seeing more of those little scenes would be painful but help him to let go because loving Sasuke means wanting him to be happy. Though I think Kakashi and Sasuke wouldn't try to hide their relationship, they wouldn't be obvious because they know it would hurt Naruto.

*Sigh* I'm talking too much lol. But really, I think I'd love to see Naruto trying to win Sasuke... finally giving up... and then meeting/getting with someone else who totally loves him but who maybe never thought they had a chance because they thought Naruto was straight but seeing him chase Sasuke... they realize that they might have a chance. I really want Naruto to be happy and right now is just so sad for him. I'm really liking this story and hope you continue.

*starry eyed* SEXUAL POSISTIONS?! You mean we get to choose? You just made this girl one happy camper! Well to be honest, the lemon scences have been great, but that was more of kakashi's loving side. We all know kakashi to be the pervy jounin we all love. So I mean you just cant end it without a kinky chapter. They have to do it somewhere they shouldnt. Doggy style or pressed up against a wall or window or something. That would just be great. Kakashi has to show of his skills xD You also cant end it where it is now, with Naruto all emo. Sauske and naruto dont really seem back to being friends yet, and naru has to be happy. I mean you could continue the love...octagon but I think that might make the story drag on. So my suggestion is find Naru someone else. That way the story wont get all complicated and long, or have a rushed ending. He could get with practically any male and I'd be satisfied. Sasuke would be shockd too since he thinks naruto is "mostly on the straight side" lol. Make sure to make him a lemon too please! It can be a minor one, more like a lime. SO 1 part lemon, 1 part lime, and a sasuke/naruto make up chappy and you'd have a good story on your hands. ^^