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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet how it ended with Kakashi and Sasuke just sleeping together (real sleep!) Poor Naruto is going to be so hurt... Sakura...ugh lol.
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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to either check your work or have a beta check it - it's bowl of ramen not bowel!
It's an interesting chapter. I feel bad for Naru because he's going to get hurt by this.
It's an interesting chapter. I feel bad for Naru because he's going to get hurt by this.
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June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this! It was so sad how Sasuke was trying to recreate what he had felt with Kakashi but it just didn't work. He doesn't seem to realize that how you feel about someone emotionally makes a big difference and since he hadn't thought of Naruto in that way it just couldn't be the same. And I'm so glad you wrote it that way because otherwise I would have be rooting for Naruto lol.
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June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually enjoy KakaSasu, but that was really good. I love your style of writing; the way you depict the characters and the blunt off hand thoughts that really hit hard to the plot of the story. I think your version of Sasuke is one of my favorites i've read, i think his frankness to sex would be exactly what he would be like to match his blunt, usually cold personality. In all i really loved it and can't wait for more! ^_^
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great!
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol omgosh when Sasuke mentioned that he remembered Naruto, Kiba, the Kakashi screwing him I thought you meant that they had all had a turn with Sasuke! lol Oh wow. I wondered why Naruto would have been so surprised the next morning and left Sasuke alone with Kakashi. Got it now... I like how you've described Sasuke and their storyline. Especially how you described Sasuke as looking defeated... like he was discouraged that something he really wanted was out of his grasp.
Write plenty more!!!
Write plenty more!!!
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Kakashi-sensei, "What the fuck is going on?!" I can't wait to see how and where this going to go. I hope to see you soon.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo! I like this! Which is really strange because I never read Kakashi/Sasuke stories because I just can't picture them together.
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Huh... I'm really surprised you don't have a single review yet. But I loved it and can't wait to read more!!!! Its an awesome idea that I don't think I've ever seen before and definitely not with these characters. Other than a few minor grammar mistakes(but who doesn't have those), it was great!!! Hope to see more soon!!!
~nekluvshp
nekluvshp@hotmail.com
~nekluvshp
nekluvshp@hotmail.com
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh! please make it a Kakasasu!!!