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for Nothing But Troublesome

by AngelTalion

person Althydia
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this story... Nice chemistry between Shikamaru and Neji - they sure can challenge each other at least.
Isn't it going to be a problem that Neji can't give Shikamaru an heir (even if he's gay)? Or could they use a surrogate if necessary? And so Shika is going to top in this story, right?
Also, I didn't know that Sasuke was back (albeit in a cell), but I really look forward to his discussion with Neji about gay sex. For me they are both stuck up and quite traditional, so it should be funny (I guess that's why Neji would go to him and not someone else?). And I thought that Sasuke was rather asexual (except for Naruto - canon included), so I'm intrigued as to why Neji thinks he's an expert in gay sex here. Does he have a relationship with Naruto? I guess we'll know more in the next chapter. And if Naruto has not realized his feelings for Sasuke yet (as Shikamaru seemed to imply in the last chapter, unless I got confused), I'd love to see Shika explain it to him (could be pure comic relief, in my opinion).
I can't wait for Shika and Neji's wedding night too!
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad neji was satisfied with the kimono.
Going to Sasuke for advice. this is going to be... awkward. *snickers and rubs hands together.
I look forward to it.
person cynaga
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm waiting (patiently?) for you to take out the "no sex" part of the description...
person Dorkchic
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had some funny thoughts inspired by this. The first was to wonder if Sasuke was actually gay. If he is then he might not be interested in having such a private discussion with Neji because we all know how open and forthcoming he is. If he is not gay and Neji is just assuming then the situation will still be strained, but with a lot more embarrassment tossed in. If he is and does not realize he is gay then Neji just might be setting him on a path toward Naruto.

On the other hand Neji and Sasuke have a decent amount in common and similar temperments so Sasuke might be willing to help out a sort of friend - especially if he has been in jail for a while. Is Sasuke in jail forever? Is it a short sentence and the probation? If it is the case of Neji setting him down the path or Sasuke already being gay then maybe Sasuke could talk Neji into carrying a message or messages to Naruto. Looking foward to the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Virgin!Neji marrying Shikamaru who doesn't play bottom. ^___^

That fight's going to be epic.

Looking forward for Neji's conversation with Sasuke. For some reason, I believe that if Sasuke hadn't left the village, they would've ended up being friends.

Good job. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I like it, I'd like to see more. I harbor a soft spot for Shikamaru, and I don't see him enough in fanfics I feel. Anyway, nicely written.
person Chadera
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hope there is an update soon. I can't wait to read it!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, I really can't wait to see the two of these forced into each others life, it was hilarious to see their quick wit and cutting remarks. I couldn't stop laughing when Shika mentioned Neji thinking of him naked already, it was so unexpected and funny. I'm really lookig forward to the next chapter and I can't wait to see who can push the hardest, their both very strong so it should make for an interesting match. Xx
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Me like and me like some more~!! XD
person satterb
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I look foward to more. Thanks for sharing.