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for Nothing But Troublesome

by AngelTalion

person Anon
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue, it seems very interesting due to the fact that it's unusual, and your writing would do the weirdness justice :)
person Lavinia
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aah, but this seems promising! I sure hope that you continue with thid, it has a lot's of potential!
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea, cant wait to see how shikamaru will react.
person Ivy
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get a chance to update soon. This beginning is hilarious and Shikaku is just like oh shit what have I done. Hiashi being sort of resigned and having held on to the sheet of paper leads me to think that he needs to get Neji out of the Hyuugas. It is refreshing to see him or at least see Hiashi appear to care about Neji.

This story has the potential to be amazing and I look forward to your next installment.
person Infek
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This could become damn interesting. Fancy continuing this because I can tell you that it would be very much appreciated.

/Greetz Infek
person v
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love shika and neji..so i'm excited to read more. :)
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really want to see what happens when the boys are informed. lol
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just one word - MORE!!!! Please? *makes-puppy-dog-eyes*
person angelj232000
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More Please!!!!!!!!! This was great!
person filthyfigs
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great opening to what could be a wonderful Shikamaru/Neji story! I say go with it, and what ever else comes to mind, write it down. You can go so many ways with this plot (which is a great plot by the way, wish I thought of it ;p) I a looking forward to the next chapter which will hopefully be soon!