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YOU KILLED TACHI-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D:

And sadly, that is the perfect thing to do. You're such an awesome writer and I am hooked on this story. Please update soon.

Wow, I blink & you put up 2 chaps! You r good ;-). This is so totally cool. Thanx 4 sharing

AWWW itachi can't be hurt!! I actually like him in this story!! Thanks for the chapter!

Don't listen to jerk reviewers, sorry you have to deal with it. :/

I really like the way the story is going, its got the right amount of suspense, and leaves you attached to the characters. And on top of all that, you portray Naruto's confusion and lack of expirence really well.

I'm sure I could nitpick and find grammer issues here and there, but overall, this is a really well written story thats had me hooked from chapter one. Keep up the good work!!

Oooooooooh, YOU BIG MEANIE!!! I just know I'm gonna check if you updated every 5 minutes from now until you do! So, please be quick! I'm barely hanging on to my sanity, here.

Bluegirlami21 needs to shut her flapping cake-hole and write her own damn fic.

Firesnake, you do what you need to do, I'm with you. :)

I am going to apologize to you. I know you said that you were going to ignore any other reviews from me and that is your right. I am not a mean person and I am sorry if what I said in my first review and in my response upset you. I just want to apologize to you wholeheartedly. It was not my intention to tell you how to write your story and I am sorry that it came across that way. I was angry when I responded back to you and the proper response should have been nothing of the sort. I meant what I said about wishing you the best of luck with the story and the reassurance that while I may have found one issue to nitpick to death there were many other things about your story I found enjoyable. Sorry again and I hope that there are no hard feelings between us in the future if necessary.

Hi, I love this chapter, the way you write your stories is so passionate. and the end of this chapter was a surprise, I hope everyone is okay. Great job on the fic. :)

Hmm, Itachi is one confusing character but I do genuinely believe he has Sasuke's best interest at heart....I'm afraid for Naruto when Fugaku decides to make his actual presence known. And I thought it was really good to show that Sakura cared for Naruto by being scared for his safety. =) I'm rather on the fence about Sakura's character in general (especially in the manga itself) but I liked that you could see she cares for him.

Chapter 4 was very lovely. I'm glad you explained a bit about Itachi and Sasuke. I now understand why Itachi is so possessive. Will Naruto eventually be accepted by Itachi or will Itachi continue to resent him? I hope Naru-chan and Sasu-kun work everything out. Poor Naru is so overwhelmed and it seems like everyone close to Sasuke wants to keep them apart. It's a shame, really.