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for Calling You

by FireSnake

person dar
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! TEhehe i love how protective sasuke is of naruto!!
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh we get to see a darker and a lighter side of Itachi! I hope Naruto starts to realize that he has deeper feelings than he first thought first Sasuke. Sasuke has more than proved that he is in love with him. Its time for Naruto to start put in some work on their relationship. This story is soo good and the updates are pretty regular. cant wait for the next one.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Niice chapter~ Finaly Itachi shows his love for his little brother, couldn't say I was not hoping for it. poor Naruto his life is such a whirlpool of feelings and worries ever since Sucks-gay came into his life. Ehat I like about this story is the strong feelings Sasuke has and displays for Naruto. Also Shikamaru is such a good friend and Sakura finally shows her caring side, well hidden under her bitch-y personality.
Really nice, can't wait for more. ^_^
person chynna18rawrr
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Yay an update and its two chapters, I like how you've made things progress in the story and I'am glad itachi cares for sasuke, their are some fics where he just hates him, I like it :D
person Tea
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so fantastic *flail*
Itachi is (by far) my favorite character, so it's lovely to see you writing more of him:)
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The Shikamaru x Naruto fan service is greatly appreciated, and the banter is genuinely funny.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Shino was great! Naruto acts a bit unfair with this constant changing his mind with every new thing he finds out about Sasuke. I must say that the youngest Uchiha is amazingly patient and determined! And thank you for Itachi. I hoped he wouldn't turn out to be an ass and my hopes are true now!

PS. The review button below the text always says : "Review -title-" And in this case it says: Review Calling You! So I thought that if 'review' is calling me than I just can't forget to ever review, ne?
person roro237
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm just now closing my mouth:) WoW! That was good! Let started with Itachi saying Sasuke is married?! That bomb was huge! I was to proud of Naruto for turning down the money when it was so needed. Then the parting words for daddy was a little... scary but true. I love what you've done with Tenten and Shino. What really touched my heart was Sasuke saying please and then coming back everyday just to be near Naruto. Another bomb courtesy of the mad bomber Uchiha Itachi coming back to say ok I'll protect you while you see my little brother! What the?:) I think Itachi heart might be in the right place. I loved it!! ^_^
person dar
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm glad when things work out for Naruto, and there aren't any evil women who will try to steal sasuke! Thanks for the new chapter, I'm always glad to read a new chapter from you!! I don't care what other people say but you definitely are a writer i would like to read from! Thanks!
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! The best part, besides the lowdown on the family drama backdrop was the evil door that wouldnt open!!! its amazing how your brain doesnt work when we are frustrated!!!