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Aw poor Suigetsu. The road to hell is paved with good intentions I guess.
Sasuke is more and more likable. I hope Itachi will get his chance to prove himself too.
it's nice that Sasuke's got such a great job and that the atmosphere in his office is so cool. Pets in the office? I like that.
Thanks for the update!

WoW! Yess! That was crazy good:) I love your chapters! You have so much packed in them:) Sasuke's work place. You described it beautifully. I was walking around with Naruto:) I was happy to see Karin got knocked down a few pegs. But what the heck is up with Suigetsu? I'm wondering does he have the hots for Sasuke? Or he just doesn't have people skills:) I really love your story! You have me hooked ^_^

aww, poor naruto. but why didn't sasuke go after him?

Itachi's an ass hole... but Sasuke is a biggerone for letting Naruto walk and get away. Far enough that Shikamaru could be called and get to him to pick him up. Poor Naruto.

Sasuke can't pull his personal thing together for shit, can he?

Naruto is screwed. And not in a smoking-a-cigarette-afterward way.

I just read all three chapters and I now understand the whirlwind idea. That's rather brilliant. It was fast-paced in a good way now, and it works perfectly for the way the story is unfolding. This seems to be Naru-chan's first love, so of course it will be intense and fast. I feel rather sorry for him though because of the ways Sasuke is jerking him around, both intentionally and unintentionally.

I can't wait to see how this pans out. I hope Itachi doesn't get too much in the way. When is Shika going to explain to Naruto how he knows Sasuke? I think that would make for an interesting tidbit.

Great chapter! And Sasuke is not a bastard! Surprising! But in a good way I guess... I think Naruto should learn to use a subway or bus to be more independent... Shika is awesome! He always is. Just as Itachi (sex on legs)...
Thanks for the update!

this story just caught my attention and i managed to read the whole three chapters today

this is really an interesting story, please do update soon!

Itachi's soo mean how could he look down Naruto just because of his background, i really dislike that kind of persons

i do hope that Naruto is okay

please update soon!

It's fun for me to read this story because I live in San Francisco:) Do you live around here?
Just a quick note though... how can you go to Round Table when you're in the same general area as North Beach? I guess it's best to use a recognizable chain for story purposes though... it's not like everyone's heard of Pizza Orgasmica (even though it's not really in North Beach... technicalities) or North Beach Pizza (the one over on Grant is so cute)
Look at me assuming you live here...
This story is lovely so far!

Haha i can only imagine how pissed sasuke is right now!! OH naru it's alright it'll get better, thanks for the chappie!!! I agree i do love where this is going, cliche doesn't mean its not enjoyable!!