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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it! Please hurry with the next one =)
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this teaser... I hope you post the rest soon! I wish I had the power to beta but I'm really not good at all with that. :) I hope you find a good one though cause this is made of win.
Can Sasuke speak English? Is Shikamaru really jealous?! BAHHH...
Can Sasuke speak English? Is Shikamaru really jealous?! BAHHH...
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this, I look forward to reading the rest! xXx
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it!! That was awesome! By the way the correct way to write the show they were watching is Doctor Who. I love that show.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice and cute start. Sasuke is already possessive and Naruto seems quite taken too. Will we know more about Naruto's past? Also, does Naruto have Japanese origins, even though he can't speak Japanese?
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic start for this story. I was really hooked from the get-go. Nice job on pacing and the like. I can't wait to read more.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!!!! I am really digging this mysterious Sasuke and his role. I hope he isnt trying to play mind games on our poor naruto here, he seems like he needs a hero.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like cliche too! As long as it's well done of course....and you are doing quite well so far.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this. As a native San Franciscan, I can just picture where this is all taking place !