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by moodysavage

schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lemons

Went and reread it all again!! Laughed my headoff as usual!! Its just so funny and adorable....one you never get tired of and can enjoy again and again!!
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You had me giggling, especially the "Sasuke is my honey" one. Hilarious!! The closest I ever came to a poem about the boys was this:

"There once was a man from the Leaf / Who fell for the Uchiha chief. / They fought and they wrestled, / At his neck he was nestled, / And their honeymoon lasted a week."

*gigglesnort* My one foray into fan fic poetry, and it turned out to be a limerick. ;P Thanks for the laughs!
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! This was beautiful. I love them all in fact! Well done love.
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
gushes. so awesome. I'm glad she came around in the end.
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 5 Sakura's Jealousy

I really enjoyed this poem and how happy Naruto and Sasuke were and the peek into their private lives. (I sooooo HATE Sakura and was happy she was out of the picture for a time.....would so love to see her gone from the real story line but can be happy when I find it here in fanfiction instead at least.)I enjoyed the view and the progress and changes!!

Can't wait to see what you update on your other projects!!
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm mad no ones naked! D:<

lol jk I love this! Sakura is so mean, at least it's a happy ending :3
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the update!! I was so shocked with the last part.....soooo did not see that coming. I just love the his toughts/his thoughts its just too cute to see whats going on in their heads!! Fun and Cute all at the same time as well as very Sweet!!

Now you just need to update the other ones too!!! =) I soooo want to see what happens next in them too!!
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!! The two new poems are just sooo cute!!! :D

Naruto is so seme -licks lips-

Too bad Sas-UKE has him taken -pouts-
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 3

I really enjoyed this poem and though it fit both of them perfectly. I would really like to see you write a story cause I think you could write a really great story that would be fun to read. Its amazing how easy it is for you to come up with such long poems so quickly!! That shows a lot of skill....I so wish I could write!! =)
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schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so excellent. I loved the second poem. I couldn't stop laughing. XD