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I just loved the poem about Naruto and Sasuke and Sakura working so hard to see Kakashi's face!!! It kept me laughing from start to finish!! I loved the part about them not getting to see his face till he's dead.....that would so be like Kakashi....but then again they could have asked the Ramen guy and his daughter what he looked like because from their expressions....he must be pretty hot!! I've never seen either of them blush in an episode like they did when they got to peek at him eating. LOL But we all do love a mystery!!!

This is Timber.....aka ....Timberwolf....aka HotAnimeGuysFan ....lol....

I think this is quite a nice series of poems! I'd actually like to see more of them if you plan on adding more to this mini series? You do very well with rhyming and not having it come off as trying to hard. So super kudos! It takes a lot of thought to put something like this together ^.^

Poem 4 made me really sad. Sasuke is so hurt and broken and I just hope maybe Naruto can heal him a bit.

That third poem was really super cute. <3

Naruto's POV
I just love this!! I think its really CUTE!! :) Can't wait to see more!!

Sasuke's POV

LOL This is funny and so like Sasuke!! I just loved how it developed and the flow that it went!! You so have a gift with words!! Its nice to see you post and not keep that talent hidden like you have all these years!! Maybe you can post some of your other works as well for everyone to see. Such a gift is ment to be shared with the world!!

I loved Sasuke's POV. This is going to be such a cute collection of poems. <3 Can't wait for more. Also, are you going to mention the Zabuza saga? I think it would be cute to see Naruto sad about Sasuke almost dying and what not.

I really liked Naruto's calm determination.

:) This made me smile! And I haven't even had my coffee yet.