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July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your writing. The universe you've created is great. How you're portraying Sasuke is actually amazing and similar to how I would've pictured him as. :) I hope you'll write more about Naruto and Sasuke's relationship.
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, simple beautiful.
Sasuke wants something even more with Naruto but he is afraid if he gives in completely, that Naruto will live him because he wasn't challenge anymore to Naruto. Sasuke should try with Naruto or he will never know how much Naruto feels for him. :)
Thank you for this amazing chapter :)
Sasuke wants something even more with Naruto but he is afraid if he gives in completely, that Naruto will live him because he wasn't challenge anymore to Naruto. Sasuke should try with Naruto or he will never know how much Naruto feels for him. :)
Thank you for this amazing chapter :)
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that! You didn't make the extended metaphor too much or boring. It was a great insight into Shika's mind and his relationship.
Great job!
Great job!
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was good, it didn't even need sex- though the scenes you write sizzle. I loved how you had a sub to sub talk and addressed the insecurities we see in Sasuke throughout this series. That he talked to Shikamaru was icing, Shikamaru is my favourite lazy genius. I love your work so thank you for writing this bit of insight.
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For me this was one of your best. I really appreciate it when an author gets into a character's head and then manages to communicate that to the reader. This was excellently done and utterly absorbing.
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wonderful~!
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Secretly, I imagine Sasuke and Shikamaru holding hands and being best fwiends. XD
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice! real nice! it is also the first one that i have read that has a TALKATIVE sasuke....meh it fits the story so its all good! XD
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely and sweet. You're so awesome.
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved how vulnerable Sasuke was and trying to mask it for Shikamaru. I hope that talk they had really does sink into Sasuke's brain and he can truly give Naruto the happiness they both deserve.