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by Darkprism

schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THAT.
WAS.
GREAT!!!!!!!

emotions and sexy all over the place.
and lordy, there is a Manhattan, Kansas!

thank you.
(for the geography lesson too)
person akira
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was great!!! please you have to write anout Naru and Sasu, perhaps after this conversation? or other day but linked to this? is true what Shika said in the end. what would Sasuke do? but is also true that sasu is broken and only Naru knows that. MAHHH i love so much this stories of yours.

XOXO
Aki
person lo
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As like all your writing this oneshot rocked. I love the devotion and the depth of feeling these couples have. The conversation between those two was wonderful. I just absolutely love these stories, there is a maturity in the relationships that I don't even see in mainstream published works. You are very talented.