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a few typo;s and such but appart from that, pretty good. Wb btw.

I'm still here reading and waiting for more. I hope to see you soon.

Sasuke surprised when he punched Naruto in the nose lol. This is hilarious Love this :)

The Canvas

I came home to read during my lunch break and got to read up to chap two where Sai is locked in a closet again.....OH my gosh I about died laughing and would love to tell my boss I'll be late but think he'll kill me so have to go back to work....after driving like a demon...lol LOVE THIS STORY and it shows AMAZING SKILLS!!! LOVE TO SEE THE REST OF YOUR WORK!!! PLEASE!!!!

Chap. 3 I am soooo excited to see what happens next!! I just love your writing style and attention to details!! Its funny and serious and full of life.....this is just sooo much fun to read!!!! LOVE IT!!!

I do enjoy the parts where they wish trouble on each others while completely unaware of the other personally....it makes me think of those stories you hear of twins or siblings far away from each other that are like intuned to each other or even like fate setting up the stage for those that are designed for each other to finally meet each other and complete the race they were ment to run together. =) lol LOVE IT!!

This story is odd, but in a good way--pretty much all the characters here have their little quirks (especially Sasuke & Sai), and the idea of Sasuke falling in love with a painting is unique. If I'm reading the story correctly, it really is the painting Sasuke likes, with all the mysterious nuances in it, and not necessarily the painting's model, though he certainly doesn't hurt. Should be a funny meeting between Naruto and Sasuke as Naruto will demand to have the painting taken down and Sasuke will be all "no, that's mine!" The only thing I'm not a fan of is their needless irritation with one another. It doesn't seem logical that they would be wishing bad things on one another at this point. I know you acknowledge that it the story, but it still seems forced to me. If they absolutely *must* argue and throw all the usual insults at one another, it seems to me there's already conflict built into the story with the painting. No need to inflate it beyond that.

Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

Can't wait for Naru and Sas to brush up against each other... should be... explosive.
*smirks and cackles evily.

lol I like this chapter. I like how they keep randomly coming in close to each others orbit before going off to their own life. I like how you're taking your time setting the scene and characters too. Itachi terrorizing his employees but still wanting Sasuke to learn some social skills is hilarious lol. Write lots more!!!