rate_review Reviews

Wow, I'm actually really impressed with this story's pacing...everything's happening in easy, flowing succession. KUDOS. If I had any improvements it would be this; Orochimaru is SCARY! I remember watching naruto for the first time and that guy LITERALLY gave me nightmares (even before I knew he'd be a main villain). I think Saya (nice name btw) would still be attracted to him but could probably do to witness some of Orochimaru's horriffic power/capabilities. Also, very interested in the development of Saya's own curse mark. Will she and Sasuke or anyone else from Konoha be crossing paths soon? VERY eager to read more :)

oh! im kinda scared for saya. I wonder what would cause her to go back to orochimaru besides the desire she feels for him? probably has to do with that bite mark.
Well, whatever the reason, I'm sure he'll show her how upset she made him with her departure. poor saya.
Hopefully akira won't ever meet up with orochimaru or his men again. I'm excited to read the sequel to nurse me! ^__^