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for While You Were Out

by Mishka00

schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent drabbles..
I had so much fun reading them, i still feel fluttery inside..

I am a big sasusaku shipper, i love the both of them.. So much wishing that they would end up together in the end..
Well it is up to kishimoto-sensei to decide on that.. This is two complicated individuals that we are talking about..

I actually had much more fun ready M rating multi drabbles, because of the idea of having the both of them in different scenarios..

I had a great time..
I was giggling w/ the thought of how ignorant naruto was in taking hint about 'their' relationship.. He was blinded by friendship, i guess..

I was left hanging w/ the 2nd chap.. I was hoping for more..
But still the ending was great you really wanted the readers to be intrigued what happened next, & what compromising positions did they actually chose..

I would what to read more from you..
Keep it up!

Long hair love,
~A.E.
person eri
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ehi! This was really good! A real story, with sex AND emotion..and Sasuke was so...Sasuke..
person babablacksheep
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, such a great story! So interesting that I had to read both stories one after another, without stopping. Please keep them coming. It just sucks that no one on this site really likes Sasu/Saku. People don't even care about the stories plot, as long as it has Naruto screwing some girl. Would you consider writing this on the regular fanfiction site? I'm really confident you could get huge reviews for this.