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May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. Please update soon!!!!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter from Naruto's pov too!!! Naruto isn't lying to himself which is different from a lot of fics that have him being so oblivious to everything and I like that he realizes that he didn't care for Sai enough and deserved to lose him. At this point I have NO IDEA which way you're headed with this which is kinda new for me lol but I like it. Looking forward to reading more :)
(had no idea my email showed up!?! so don't worry about being required to make a reply or anything cause I always read the comments. wonder if it shows up when I sign in or when I don't sign in?)
(had no idea my email showed up!?! so don't worry about being required to make a reply or anything cause I always read the comments. wonder if it shows up when I sign in or when I don't sign in?)
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well heck, I left my review and it didn't take...@&# computer.
Anyway, I really really like this. You have a special story here and you have made me really like Sai and feel bad for him in this situation. Your pacing is flawless and I love how Sai's thoughts and feelings are interwoven with his interactions with Naruto. I look forward to reading more about them.
Anyway, I really really like this. You have a special story here and you have made me really like Sai and feel bad for him in this situation. Your pacing is flawless and I love how Sai's thoughts and feelings are interwoven with his interactions with Naruto. I look forward to reading more about them.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really nice pacing and ryhthm with the repeated phrases - nice~!
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. They have to be one of my favorite pairings. I cant wait to see you continue this.