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This is so intense! I really love this couple and your story!
Your writing is great, detailed and very graphic. While I was reading the story I could feel Kiba's anxiety and anticipation.

It's a pity that it's dropped because I would love to read a lot more about this unusual couple.
Well, I'm assuming that it's dropped, but maybe it's not, and someday you will decide to continue... Or maybe not, but a girl can dream! xD
Anyway, thank you for sharing all that love with us! ^^

Oh shot is right oh I love it. I wouldn't have looked for this pairing normally but I
Am totally digging your story. I love Itachi as dom and is ideals and rules are
Just great and love Kiba's path into subspace.

Hey, this is really good, I don't usually like Kiba Itachi fics but this one just flows so well I cant help but like it XD I really like the base idea as well as the execution you've made for the story this far... no so much with the cliff hangers in the middle of smex though >__< lol anyways keep it up I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon.

i like this a lot when is the next update?

The 'Oh shit' there at the end is so perfect!
Leaves me wanting more but also giving a good end to that chapter without feeling dropped.

I love this but you are such an incredible tease ... the progress is painfully slow and every chapter is a cliff hanger!

You realize, of course, that was a terribly mean place to stop the chapter at? ;P

I like the fact that Kiba freaked out a bit during the foreplay. Since it's all new to him, that's much, much more realistic than if he'd gone along with everything perfectly and then discovered by the end of it that OMG, he's born to be a sub! Theoretically, since this is a type of sex it never crossed his mind to participate in, he's not going to be perfect at it the first time, and may not ever be entirely perfect at it if it's not 100% his kink. Well, as a good dom, Itachi should be able to accommodate and still enjoy himself in the process, just as he's done so far.

a very very nice story. Absolutely LOVE itachi. :) him smirking is just too hot. Either way, kiba isn't too bad either. a very unusual pairing but i'm starting to like it quite a lot. anyway, itachi as a dom is of course out of this world. Keep up the good work!

I had two immediate reactions to this story. The first being WOOHOO!!! and the second being NOOO!!!!! Now let me explain, the first was due to being so excited that you updated this story. The second was due to where you left the story off..... cliffhangers are down right evil. Anyways, I like how you juxtaposse Itachi's and Kiba's perspectives. I think that it makes the story flow better with the different points of view. Can't wait to read the next chapter (hint, hint - update soon). :)

I like how Kiba is slowly figuring things out. I like the learning process Kiba is experiencing.