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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Itachi was nervous about giving him the contract. And that Kiba came out with no shirt and saw how Itachi reacted :)
I like your style of writing how you take turns on their POV too.
I like your style of writing how you take turns on their POV too.
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I can not wait for you to update this story again (even though you just did). The chemistry you have going on between Kiba and Itachi is palpable. (I am really surprised you don't have more reviews too.)
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hot and sexy :) I really like hearing what Itachi is thinking and how he's been wanting Kiba for a long time. Obsessive love is one of my favorites to read about.
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is quite sexy. I like the fact that Kiba is no wilting flower. I think Itachi is a little over-confident at this point and absolutely sure he's going to get what he wants. But he likes Kiba's defiance, doesn't he? Kiba should turn the tables on him a bit and not give him exactly what he wants in exactly the way he wants it. Itachi will probably discover he likes that even more than when everything goes according to plan. ;)
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I started to read this because I liked how Bros was written and I am SO glad I did!
My goodness you are such a tease though! I love it!! <3 XDD
My goodness you are such a tease though! I love it!! <3 XDD
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kiba, Itachi and the car... a perfect combination. Of course Sasuke wouldn't like camping, but the fact that he went and took Naruto spoke volumes. Too bad Kiba doesn't know about the voicemail that Itachi left him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh...this is getting good. Itachi has made his interest know and now it's time to play :)
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update this story... it is so good. I like the tension you have going on between Kiba and Itachi, it is just the right amount.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is cute. I like how Kiba has no clue. Usually Naruto is the clueless one so it's funny that this time it's Kiba putting himself in a trap and that he has not idea about Naruto & Sasuke. I don't know why there isn't more Kiba stories out there because I like his character.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far this is fun. I like what you are setting up in this first chapter and I like the hint of tension too.