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for Stars and Pizza

by kaiyousama

schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The latter part was nice, the way you described and contrasted the nights coolness with human heat, the wind, the smell and the sight; How you broke that moment down to its most simplest and beautiful... it just makes you wanna sigh...
person Ka17
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was really sweet. I loved it! Made my day a little bit better. Awesome oneshot .
person richon
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very nice, soft. i had a great time thank
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so romantic. It made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwww....that was so sweet