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OMG this is absolutly stunning, I love the way you have described this, the way you have the characters interacting and of course my favorite couple Sasuke Naruto lol, the funny thing is I never come to the AU area of Naruto, in fact I had NO idea there was another area to Naruto other the the one I was going to, it wasn't till a link to a story bought me here and I found this story, its a wonderful story and I love the detail, love the way it is progressing and I cant wait for more, thank you for the wonderful read, but just the thought of Naruto saying Kabutu is nice still boggles the mind lol, again thanks for the great read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Nice story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing the other clubs and there styles. I wonder who the murder will be? keep up the great work. ^_^

I'm into this story! Please update soon. And that image of Naruto . . . I started salivating! And I'm not even into the blond!

GREAT story! Pulled me right in. I'm excited to read more. :D

Very interesting. I like the way you write Sasuke and Kakashi, I'm curious to see how this will progress, though I'm having a daunting feeling that Izumo wont be with us for a long time. I'm looking forward to reading the descriptions of the other clubs. I wonder if Gaara and Kankuro are dancers as well? It did say that Temari was running it to support them, but?
There are some typos/grammatical mistakes, it is a bit distracting, but besides that it is well-written. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Very well-written story. It was enjoyable for me to read. I would be made quite happy if you continued it. My only critique is to maybe work a bit more on the structure of your dialogue. Other than that, I have no complaints.

I like this. I hope you continue.

There have been several serial killers in LA and the surrounding area, like Charles Manson, and also some famous unsolved murders like The Black Dahlia. The Chief of Police would be the captain and that's a position you're promoted to, although it's not without politics. There's also a sherriff. The Captain would be in charge of the LAPD, while the sherriff, who is elected to that position, would be in charge of the county.

Oh my gosh! This story is so awesome! I need more! *starts shouting* More I tell you! *whispers* More!(I fear I overuse the exclamation point...)

In America we do call the head of police the chief of police(chief for short) super intendent is like a school principle's boss or somthing like that.

I find it interesting. one question: What is (are) the pairing(s)?
I look forward to see where this goes :)

WOW, yes yes yes, you should SO continue this!!!! You've got my attention 150% and- OH LOOK, A FOX!!! *glomps fox to ground*

(Lol, no, really, you should continue, I'm lovin' how it's playin' out!!!)

(P.S. Could Naruto be the killer?? Just thought I'd beg for killer cuteness... *blush* )