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ohhhh...that was realllllly good!!!!!!!!! it was bittersweet and there wasn't any other way it could be for this. I liked that they realized they were taking a different step and they all paused... and I like that Raido made that decision. It fits that he wouldn't be as afraid to take that step as the others. *sigh* it's like harry potter ending... something you've loved throughout the story and hate to see ending but you're also glad to see how the conclusion works out. that's how I feel about this story.

so complicated *sigh*

*Slams empty coffee cup down next to an empty jar of instant coffee grounds....*
I stumbled onto your story late last night and after calling in sick to work, drinking more than enough coffee to cause a heart attack, and unplugging my phones- i have read all 27 Chapters!
I cant believe how great this story is, just amazing. Your so talented, i feel like im in the story. I hate to admit it, but im DYING to see/read Kotetsu and Rai in bed! <3 Thank you so much for writing this! I LUV IT!

[ch 28] a foursome? that's your solution? i didn't see that one coming... not a bad idea at all!!! very HOT!

whew! (fanning self) that was awesome...really meltdown awesome... whoo hoo!

I loved the looks for approval and touching among the four. And I really liked that part where Raido took his shirt off and hesitated like he wasn't sure if he would be accepted and he was totally accepted by Kotetsu. They were purposely allowing their lovers and best friends to be with the other and there was no jealousy. I think Raido said it correctly when he said their wasn't anyone else he would trust Izumo with other than Kotetsu and Genma. And that part where Genma asked if he could mark Izumo... and that other part where Kotetsu leaned over to take care of Izumo... and uh... well... quite a few of the parts... *grin* well there were a lot of parts I could talk about that I liked lol.

now... about those rings... hmmmmmm

Haha. oh my goodness. such complications are surfacing. But it makes perfect sense, with everyone looking at the other person's partner. If this doesnt end up t be a straight four-way menage, I will be surprised. It might solve their problems, though. I could see understanding coming out of this. I can't wait to read about it. oh my, this will be HOTT! ^_^

I really liked how you wrote this chapter...you have a knack for writing truly hot and sexy scenes. But it felt like I had missed something before this scene. You know like when you leave the room during a movie and you've missed out on something really important?

Kotetsu, Izumo and Genma all know that they love 2 others. And I could see how Genma could be attracted to Izumo because he'd noticed him before and thought about him as the one that the 2 people he loves are in love with so he might be curious as to why and as a former playboy he could still be attracted. But it's Raido who stands out oddly. He wasn't a playboy and he hasn't figured out his feelings for Genma yet other than a connection. So I can't see him suddenly being attracted to Kotetsu. I CAN see him joining in to see if it's possible to be a foursome BECAUSE he loves Izumo and Genma and realizes that they both love Kotetsu too. And I could see Kotetsu doing the same because of his love for Izumo and Genma.

Actually I guess I see Raido as someone who would purposely try this out because it seems to be the only solution for this situation for those he cares about. Because otherwise I don't see how he'd make a move on Kotetsu or why Kotetsu would respond to him.

Arrgggg.... this sounds like I didn't like the chapter but I did! It's just that Raido... I don't want him to be just messing around because of what that guy said. He could take that idea and decide to try it for the others and then realize that yeah... it is love with Izumo and Genma so it's all worth it to see if it would work with him and Kotetsu loving them.

Wow. this is just getting even more complicated. I do have a strong fondness for Genma/Kotetsu, so them taking this new step in their relationship is fine for me. but with the story meaning to be a Kotetsu/Izumo fic, this is gonna be a very interesting turn. If anything, this to me sounds like a clear sign to Izumo that, if you truly want to be with kotetsu, ur gonna have to fight for him. *shakes head in amazement* this is such an awesomely complicated story. ^_^

wow... that chapter was so painful. Does Raido have an idea?

now it's getting painful... it's not going to be easy to ignore anymore. I don't know why but I worry about Genma's feelings the most. I think he seems to be the most vulnerable. o