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aha! So the time has finally come. They have finally reunited with their significant others and told them the truth. I kinda figured everyone would take it okay, since the situation has been known to happen. But now we have a clue into the future. the reunion sex between Raidou and Izumo was telling for both of them, and I imagine Genma and Izumo will feel the same. except, with their history, I imagine they will actually be able to talk to each other about it. Hm... fun things are to come. ^_^

ohhh I just love Kotetsu and Genma together. Love them love them love them love them!

And while I know the best friend pairs will end up together, they really are a very special couple.

Now I think it will have to be Raido and Izumo who break up first because they can't stand to not be with their best friends. Kotetsu and Genma are still at the 'never tried and gave up before trying' stage. But Raido and Izumo seem to be getting ready for the 'why didn't I ever try' or maybe 'I will regret it if I never try to see if it would work'

I loved this chapter.

wow. they finally did it. oh, i can't wait to see those four in one room together.

awwww... just... awwww. I totally agree, that was making love. It was different from Raido and Genma because their time together intense and immediate while Izumo and Kotetsu had Kotetsu thinking what was best for Izumo more. Even in shutdown he was putting Izumo first.

Next... the meeting? the talk? *fingers crossed*

I was stressed that they were going to get caught and have to be rescued. I had visions of them finally being together because they thought they were going to die and then their boyfriends showing up. I like this so much better. I liked that they successfully retrieved the scroll themselves because I think they felt like they weren't given enough chances to show how capable they are. Now they need to just NOT ... SLOW... DOWN!!!

Oh man. This mission just got a lot more complicated. Now they have ninja after them? *sigh* I hope they make it home before they get caught, but whats the fun in that? hehe At least they got in smoothly. I totally thought they were gonna get caught. THAT would have been a travesty.

oh my gosh... the only thoughts going through my mind now is TIME! expected back in 5 days? day and a half to get there? and in the other chapter weren't they supposed to be finished in a day or two? That means they will get to the city on the same day/night that Kotetsu & Izumo are going after the scroll! Right?!? Right?! Arrgggg!!!!

Well... at least they're not arriving when they were in the shower. *cringe* Fine... they can all just get married... to each other. It will be a 4 person marriage without Raido and Kotetsu sleeping together. arrrgggg!!!

*sigh* so much confusion. This is getting really complicated. It will be a very interesting situation when they finally resolve it.

you write like... chapter after chapter of foreplay between Kotetsu & Izumo. I absolutely love it. You are realllllllyyyy skilled at those scenes. These two are definitely close to their breaking point. There's no way they can go back and try to not be a couple. Even though they love the other two I think it would about kill them to be apart from each other again. But heck out of all the couples... they all dragged their feet about liking others lol. I guess Raido and Genma though are better about stating what they want they without so much hesitation. It was Raido who finally asked Izumo out and Genma who told Kotetsu that they should be exclusive. I guess being who they are makes them better at making hard choices maybe. Arrrgggg... want them all happy happy happy!

And so, as the mission comes to a close, they both have a sexy rendezvous in the tub. Niiiice. This is getting even better. And I've been thinking. Which is worse: having a crappy mission and having sex after it, or getting a mission that required them to play as lovers acting a bit too real. Hm... I'm not sure. But I wonder how they will all end up fixing this. I hope no hearts get broken. That would ruin them all. Only the future will tell. ^_^